Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tchizek
hahahahah wonderful story! Xander and the beach party in Limbo!
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Hillarious! I love it. More coming soon? I really hope so, can't wait.
Review By [Netchka
] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
This is one messed up story/chappie.
I like it! I like it lots!!
Have some of the crew from Asgard show up for the barbecue. Especially the Warriors Three and Loki. He and Volstagg would make short work of what's left of the T-Rex.
Review By [WolfWriter
] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
I love to see you add to this, perhaps from the Sunnydale point of view. Part of that would be Giles FINALLY reaming the Necrophiliac and her (ugh) Toy when they start on how brave/noble/etc Xander was to sacrifice himself for them - the section where you gave a glimpse of Xander's thoughts/emotions at that point in time were quite moving to me. I'd really like to see SOMEBODY jerk their collective chains by pointing out exactly how little Xander actually thought he had worth living for.
Then again, I'd also like to see either Jenny still alive in the 'Dale, Angelus having not murdered her, OR Jenny showing up in Limbo and becoming more... friendly... to Our (OK, MY!) Favorite Scoobie, and them using Limbo and S'ym to actively help Faith in Boston, so as to prevent the torture and murder of her Watcher and the torture of Faith herself. Something that allows the two to escape Boston and make it to the Hellmouth, where they tell of the Twinkie eating Demon Master that saved them certain death.
'Course Faith can always add she was about to 'reward' their saviour properly when he and his sidekick vanished in a disc of light, causing some reactions from the listening Sunnydale Scoobies......
Comments from author:
Hmmm. S'ym against Kakistos....
Review By [trongod
] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orchamus
So,e things are two good for words.
Review By [Orchamus
] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TTrunks
This is funny, I can't wait to see Xander slightly annoying Illiana. I almost hope nothing tries to attack her while she's in his dimension Xander doesn't like girls or women getting hurt. Also it may be interesting to see him and the X-men interact.
Review By [TTrunks
] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from joshlamont
XD Now that's just awesome. I don't know if you've got any extra rattling around in the crazy brain of yours, but more would be much appreciated!
Review By [joshlamont
] • Date [29 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ConDaMon
haha this is awesome! please continue
Review By [ConDaMon
] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonwolftiger
Great story, The PTB's are not as bad as they usually are. Please continue as able
Review By [Dragonwolftiger
] • Date [16 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Very amusing. More soon please?
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Most excellent, I do hope that you continue this.
Think of the chaos Xander can cause the Marvel-verse
Review By [LFW
] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TJG
A suggestion could be to have Xander learn how to be a sorceror from Doctor Strange and Limbo manipulation from Sym. From Doctor Strange would be learning about personal magic and external magic (invoking himself, his soulsword, and section of Limbo) and in exchange working out how Doctor Strange can invoke him to summon things like food and drink or items. From Sym how to alter beings who give their consent like providing supernatural medical care/healing or to empower them.
With both he could open a kind of Fantasy Island (though far more benevolent and party-like) and merchant (fair exchanges among the realities, without any selling of souls). Those who choose to be employees could be empowered using those he knew as templates like a Buffy type as a warrior, a Giles type as researcher and librarian, etc. He could have special deals for invoking him with prices depending on what is being asked for. A "To Go" (as in "By Xander' Sword, a box of Twinkies to go!") spell could be essentially be free and act as simple summon for food and drink with just information on the circumstance the spell is being used under being exchanged as part of the spell and make most think Xander is harmless. A set of goods and services invocations could act like a magical ordering service where the summoner sets up a credit account and requests items or services generally off a pre-determined and updated list though negotiations are allowed (perhaps with a Willow-type who can babble and make determined faces to make sure agreements are in Xander's favor) though no weapons or offensive goods are allowed. Credit can be made by giving copies of information like books on magic or items of value (non-cursed). Then could be for those special types of summons that only are sustained Xander's desire and can be revoked that include actual weapons and special items and services. The last would be only for those Xander trusts and would be emergency use for those granted and are generally predetermined and suited for those summoners such as semi-automatic shotguns with magazines loaded with various armor piercing and anti-magic ammo and body armor and other items that might be expected from Batman or James Bond, mainly to head off those times when those like Doctor Strange has a sudden decrease of magic power for some reason. Depending on how Limbo works, it might even be possible to produce unusual substances like Uru, Vibranium, etc.
Comments from author:
You should write that story. I'd read it and I grant you use of whatever I've written so far to pull it off.
Review By [TJG
] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
I am looking forward to see what the plot bunny will inspire you to do with this story.
By the way, you might wish to correct the spelling of Dr. Strange's first name (the correct spelling is Stephen and not Steven).
::Gives the plot bunny some Carrot Salad::
Joy is the simplest form of gratitude
- Karl Barth
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dakaath
Never heard of the crossover before, but the story sounds interesting.
Review By [Dakaath
] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Almadynis
This is hilarious!!! More please!
Review By [Almadynis
] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]