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Review of chapter "Part Three" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellent piece here.

Jane is as close to a functioning sociopath as I think someone can be and not have to be put down with extreme prejudice, and I think that that same description can, under certain circumstances, be applied to a fair number of the Scoobies, as well, so he would probably fit in well with the New Council.

Looking forward to any thing more you might do with this.
Comments from author:
Thank ya, Greywizard. This is my first bit of fanfic writing but I'm still rather happy with it. And honestly, this is the fic that is connected to the whole "Scoobies working to create a New Council"-fic that I think almost all crossover writers at least think about at some point. *laughs* I've always wanted to play with the greys like you mentioned - how quite a few of them aren't quite the pureist of white-hats and then turn it into a multi-crossover where they pull people with that same mindset, like them (like Jane) from lots of places.

So, it's been a while since I originally wrote it, but this fic - and the universe I place it in -holds a fond well-worn place in my brain. *laughs*

Thanks so much for commenting!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from Waverly
Review:
This was wonderful, thank you for writing it!
Comments from author:
Thank ya kindly, Waverly - that means a lot. This was one of the first bits I ever wrote, and it might be flawed, but I'm still rather proud of it. So, thank ya for taking the time to review. :)
Review By [Waverly] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from faimyest
Review:
I love that they recruit him! it would be too bad for him to go to prison!
Comments from author:
It would. And I always thought Patrick's brand of grey would go quite well with the Scoobies! Thanks for taking the time to review, faimyest and I apologize for the long gap between my response.
Review By [faimyest] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Splendid!

Blue
Comments from author:
He he, thanks. One of my earliest bits of fanfiction. I'm still inordinately fond of a few of the lines in it - which is probably a really bad thing for me to admit. *laughs*

Thanks for taking the time to comment, Blue!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from angelus
Review:
I say you got Patrick Jane down to a fine science hope you write a bigger and better sequel this was a nice taste of things to come. I've got an idea myself but not really good with characterization and what not but my idea is basically this kind of an AU thing really Patrick Jane sometime before Red John killed his wife and kid worked for The old Watcher's Council as a consultant flash forward to S4 of Angel Wesley having no luck at interrogating Angelus brings in Patrick Jane. Anyone think that's the start of a good idea or nah
Review By [angelus] • Date [30 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from FireWolfe
Review:
I just found this piece and your other fic. Both are highly interesting. I fo hope you come back one day and update. I like the way you started this one. To be honest I always thought Willow was to easy on the Warren he deserved so much more hurt and pain. Anyway well done and more sometime please.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from LisaZ
Review:
oh this was excellent!

Lisa
Review By [LisaZ] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from FireWolfe
Review:
You so can not leave this hanging. It is a great story but it could be so much more. I think Patrick and Willow would make a great pairing and team. So how about a sequel pretty please.



Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from AngelBlack
Review:
haHA.
And so the plot thickens.
I love Jayne, so seeing him in a Buffy type setting would be quite interesting indeed.
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from slmncpm
Review:
i just found this story and really really like it. i know you say it might be a prequel for something else.. could you please tell me what? i would really love to see it.
Comments from author:
I haven't written it yet. XD

It's very preliminary right now, even in my head. But basically, it would be about the building up of the New Watchers Council focusing on the characters slightly more grey sides and how that bonds them together. The prequels would be other characters from different fandoms that I would pull in that fit that similar type; basically good but with an edge or dark side to them.

I'm not sure if that made sense since I haven't completely thought it out yet myself. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story so much and thank you for reviewing.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from GeekGoddess
Review:
Interesting and well written. Is there going to be more?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind review. This story is finished but it might turn into one of a few prequels to a much larger, multi-crossover story that I've been thinking about but have yet to write.

Wow, that sounded a bit confusing. I hope it was understandable.

Thanks again. :)
Review By [GeekGoddess] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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