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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from RankoNakajima
I can't wait until the Trust gets what's coming to them. Maybe Willow should transform them all into frogs, then kill them in a fit of terror. Or turn them into bed pans. Yea, that's it! Fully aware, living, 'still remember everything I did in my worthless life' reusable bed pans. At an old folks home. Purrrrrrrfect...MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Something to consider but, as a fan of poetic punishment, I'd probably leave the bed pan thing for the politicians since they are mostly full of crap anyway. Thanks for reading.
Review By [RankoNakajima] • Date [29 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from AngelQueen
Oh my, this is one of the best BtVS/SG crossovers I've read yet! *dances* You've done such an amazing job keeping everyone in-character - Willow's adorable babble, Carter's skepticism in the face of... pretty much everything in the Buffy 'verse, and so on. Excellent!

Thanks so much for sharing! I love this story! Hope to see more soon! :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked this. I hope to get back to this story, and my others, soon. Well, soon-ish.
Review By [AngelQueen] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from LaFlooze
Enjoying this installment and hoping you'll finish it some day!

As for chapter seven feeling off to you, the one thing that struck me was the drag of the Plane/Van Info section. It felt too much like Explaining for the Audience. I don't think Faith or Buffy would find investigative techniques perplexing. I don't think your readers would either.

Particularly since it's in the same chapter as Willow's (much more necessary) explanation of her compumagic and Buffy's declaration that the witch usually tracks down this type of info for them.

Though I did love the line about Willow accidentally erasing zeros...
Review By [LaFlooze] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from bradsan
please update. it's a good story.

some romance Graham/Buffy would be fun. there so view stories where they are involved with each other. And lets face it, he is way cuter than Riley.
Comments from author:
Thank you. There were no real pairings, other than allusions, planned for this story, but I'll keep that in mind for the future. While I can't comment on cuteness, I can say anyone is better than Riley.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from HMaxMarius
Please sir, can I have some more?

I'm not beneath begging, but I draw the line at dark rituals to get new chapters. :p
Comments from author:
Damn, because Dark Rituals (In Capitals!) are usually how I ask readers to entice me.

But don't worry, there will be more to come eventually.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Vickzie
Cool story!
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Review By [Vickzie] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from RandomSelection
Hey, I know this fac hasn't been updated for a year (almost exactly in fact), but it's an interesting approach and well written, so how about you dust it off and writ another chapter or ten? Pretty please?

Comments from author:
Crap, it really has been a year since I've touched this one. Sorry about that, I do take my stories out and poke at them every once in a while. I've just had a limited amount of time to really give them my all in the past year. That will hopefully change soon though. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [12 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FireWolfe
Please update. I miss this work a lot. Fire
Comments from author:
I'll try but many things in life are currently (and, in fact, have been for a long time) dividing my attention. It may be a while yet.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)captuniv
LOL about the reference to the Loch Ness Monster, from his dream. Yeah, I can see the combined SGC and WCI teams combing the country for the Trust and rouge NID. Plus the so-called official NID trying to get their noses under the tent to find out what's going on. Say, is Xander going to make an appearance? After that Trust guy mentioning a team in New Mexico, I was wondering if maybe Xander isn't out finding new Slayers and suddenly run across the Trust retrieval team. Would be fun. Anyway, loking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Yikes. Didn't even notice this. Must not have received an email alert. I don't usually check my reviews unless I do.

The Trust and rogue NID are certainly in for a bit of surprise later on. But the 'official' NID may not be as you might expect. And I've been asked that before about Xander and the truth is, there are no plans to include him at all in this particular story.

Thanks for your review (and pardon my lack of response till now).
Review By [(Recent Donor)captuniv] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
nice filling chapter and I'm looking forward to see what the Lt has found.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm working on something else at the moment so it will be a while to we get back to Patil and her discovery unfortunately.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
nice meet and great and lol about Wills and Dawn *g*
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Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from kittenpoker
like it! I re-read the whole thing before the new chapter and remembered why I liked it!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it enough to re-read it.
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from serenityselena
intriguing story ....
hope they manage to get the bad guys ....
can`t wait to read more ^__^
Comments from author:
Never fear; things shall work out in the end. Thanks for reading.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from LostDragon
Just found this story and read it through in one sitting, great idea and can't wait to see how the WIC/SGC task force deals with the NID. Just a few of questions where is Xander at, how long to a little violent action scene were Carter gets an eye full of just what a slayer is able to do and, how long between updates usually?
Comments from author:
In order: Beyond a few mentions, Xander will not be appearing in this story. The next chapter or the one after it. And updates, while I wish I could promise regularity, are in no way predictable, even by me.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
I think Dawn should have a shot at getting Illyria onto the investigation.
No one can be sure about its out come, if Illyria is not on it; perhaps she's won't make a difference.
Buffy is prepared to make a decision based on a dislike of someone, despite that person's skills. Blow the investigation.
Comments from author:
Illyria will show up, but mainly so that she can be introduced into the series as a whole instead of the story separately. Whether or not she actually joins the investigation is another matter entirely.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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