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Review of chapter "The Rider" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Hope you find a beta soon! Love your work!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider" from Studyofchaos
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Just found this story. I do hope it continues as Ghost Rder + Xander = Fun.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Nice detail work.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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nice how he dealt with the Zombies and the open Hellmouth
Paige is Xander's twin?....wow their mother really liked to play :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from JediKnight
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Very interesting job on the new chapter, hoping for more soon.

-Will there still be a pairing in this story for Xander?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider" from Cdog
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That was certainly a bad ass introduction for The Rider.

Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Path" from Toraneko
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"As soon as the words left his lips, Angelus saw Xander’s pupils glow like red-hot coals. He blinked and saw they were their normal chocolate brown once again." - The pupils would have returned to being black, the iris would have returned to being chocolate brown, otherwise it's a good story so far.
Review By [Toraneko] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from CageFire
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Great story. I hope you keep up the great work. Although I have to say, 4 chapters in 3 years isn't the best update rate. Although at least it's not completely dead. I'm guessing maybe it was, but the latest movie revived it or something? I hope so, I'm rather looking forward to reading more.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from misterwhy
Review:
I like that you make the story more in tune with the world of the hellmouth. The place is thick with guilty souls. Maybe Xander will have run-ins with vengeance demons like anya and d'hoffrinn? Great writing so far but would be better if yóú drifted a bit away from the movie version....it is too predictable. Keep the ink flowing:-)
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider" from VillageOrchid
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Good pay off chapter. He can't remember? Or can't remember yet due to Post-Traumatic Stress of the transformation and possession?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Great story. I like the lead up to Xanders activation as the Rider.
I like the tie to the Charmed Ones, and I like Evil's plan to win - it ties well with the Rider mythos.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider" from Morgomir
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Glad you approve the betaed version. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider" from Vilkath
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Read a few Ghost Rider comics over the years, watched the movies and all that never really heard to much about the orgins of the character. I know comics tend to have a million of them but i was wondering if what was said in this chapter happend to be one of them? I think it's a pretty cool idea anyway. The whole confess your sins before you die and you get into heaven. pr at least purgatory anyways always did seem unfair to those wronged by the sinner.

Southpark had a pretty funny episode on this topic when Cartman brought up the fact crippled, insane and other people who lack the ability or capacity to confess are pretty screwed by this loop hole.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider" from JonnyNapalm
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Okay... I've only seen a few stories out there with the Rider...but this was one of the best sequences for his revelation I've read outside the comics. Looking forward to seeing where you take this next. Well done. It'll be interesting to see where things go in Sunnydale with the Rider around... and from what we've seen it looks like the Rider and Xan will be running to Charming. That should be an interesting story to tell, depending on where you decide to place it chronologically. I'm interested in what you think will happen when/if the Rider uses the Penance Stare on Angel. My guess would be due to the specifics of his curse... that he SUFFER the guilt of his monstrous nature... that He'd judge Angel guilty...but already serving his sentance. Though he'd return should the curse break once more. Could be a fun scene to write.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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