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Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from divaslayer
Review:
Interesting story so far.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from FireWolfe
Review:
I just stumbled on to this story and do hope you update one day. It has a great start.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from ChikaraKatherine
Review:
Very, very nicely done. A very nice plot idea and well excutted. I really enjoyed all four chapters. Everyone's in for some shockers. Sev might just find some kind of peace. It would be nice. But then everyone in this has some damage. Buffy got pulled out of heaven and had to claw her way out of a coffin and grave. Willow went ultra dark and had to detoxic. I'm guessing that some of thats going to be glossed over. Thats cool. Gives room for other plot ideas. This was really a very pleasent and fun read. I thank you for taking the time to post it.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from bradsan
Review:
Please update. I want to see their reactions when she tell them her story. I also want to she the reaction of the Malfoy's. So please update
by the way I love the view stories where Snape is her father.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Love it!! ohh and i vote for lord v himself for dear buff, i don't think it's ever been done:)
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from timelordwannabe
Review:
Awesome! For pairings, I say Spike or Sirius (just to piss off Snape :D)
Review By [timelordwannabe] • Date [9 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from imperailjadefox
Review:
Love the way the story's going. I have to say bring back Spike/William Bloody. She told him she loved him. Buffy doesn't love lightly and she needs someone that understands her and support her 100%. Spike does all that. Plus, he got his soul back for her and in a way, he died for her. That doesn't make a girl change her mind about who she loves quickly. JMHO.
Review By [imperailjadefox] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from liit
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so far so good...buffy n willow willshake the wizarding world...hehehe...for pairing charlie pls...there's not alot of buffy/charlie pairing
Review By [liit] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from alexceasar
Review:
Very interesting so far. I look forward to seeing where you will take this. Good job.

As to the pairing, I think Charlie Weasley might be the way to go here. He is close to her age and would be less squig-worthy for her dad. And he works with dragons, that would definately be a help to him when dealing with a rageing Slayer.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome chapter, hopefully everyone gets to reading the story and votes... I'm personally for Serious... :)
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from dreameralways
Review:
I wasn't concerned about the OOC of Molly or Severus, they are understandable, but after being burned so many times I have trouble picturing Buffy being that open and wanting a hug. Other than that, it's shaping up well. I just recommend that you take more time with your scenes and don't rush them.
Additionally, my vote is for Charlie Weasley. Dating someone that her father knows or went to school with just seems kind of creepy.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from WolfWriter
Review:
Actually, I think you pretty much nailed Molly on the head. While she may not swear that much in canon, she certainly is capable of bossing people around.

Where's Dawn in this tale?
Comments from author:
I wrote that in the prologue that Dawn died in the cavern with the collapse of Sunnyhell with Spike... but dont worry, there will be some referances to her or maybe a surprise with her later in the story.....
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from KnightWulf
Review:
like this fic so far and hope to read more.
Tonks or bill weasley for pairings don't see much of those
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from (Past Donor)zoev
Review:
For the question of pairing, my vote goes to Sirius Black. Buffy likes older men, and also men with dark pasts, plus he just has a personality that she would get along with. Also Sirius' joking nature could possibly help her out during her time of grief.

I'm liking where this story is heading very much, but maybe you should quickly proof read it before posting, as there some easily spotted spelling mistakes- arise instead or arse, teh instead of the and Curtin instead of curtain.

Also, most people show thoughts like 'this' instead of "this" or else it gets confused with speech. Sorry for being critical, but it is easily fixed by checking it over before posting.

I do like the story though, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it, most especially if Sirius Black wins the vote. Sirius is just made of awesome.
Review By [(Past Donor)zoev] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 First Impressions" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent. My vote is for Zambini
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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