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Review of chapter "Ending 7/7" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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ahh nice the master gone and B a bit confused :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AllenPitt
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So instead of Angelus, we get Buffy-us in season 2? . Her behavior in S2.1 would be explained. This can lead to all sorts of fun situations. Not just "going evil" and all that, but having a Knight show up, out to get her, or Wardens, and so on. Would Giles or Angel notice the coin? Does she have any magical ability for the coin to enhance?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
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I do hope you'll continue this when you can! Can't wait to see what comes next.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ending 7/7" from AllenPitt
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Coin? Heh. Can't wait for a knight of the cross or a warden to show up... hm, I wonder if Giles knows about this stuff..
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Falling - 6/7" from AllenPitt
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huh...so the slayer is one of the Denarii coins? Somebody cast a spell to dilute it so the slayer host would get the power but not its personality? And now it's found a way around the restriction? That might not be of the good
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Falling - 6/7" from Sahugani
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this is shaping up to be really good :)
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beginning - 1/7" from (Current Donor)thetwitmachine
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pls be a semi evil buffy, but not a laughably 2 dimensional buffy. so far very interested!
Review By [(Current Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dying - 5/7" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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nice story so far and I fear the fight against the Mast will be the point where the coin will come forward
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dying - 5/7" from RevDorothyL
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Really intriguing set-up (particularly considering what happened towards the end of "Prophecy Girl", with Buffy coming back from her brief death suddenly stronger than before -- in this crossover 'verse, would that be the result of the fallen angel finding a way to gain more ground in Buffy's mind when she's at her most vulnerable?).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dying - 5/7" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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You know, this story would be much more enjoyable if there was some actual meat to chapters. I mean, you're averaging just over 400 words per chapter and that includes notes. I know each person has their own style but... I mean shit, I usually drop 3-5000 words per chapter. Your entire story to date is shorter than one chapter of my stuff. Each time you post, I just get back into the story and then it's already over. It's very off-putting.
Comments from author:
Yeah, to be honest this is more of a draft than the real story. I'm writing these for the August Fic a Day. You'll see a much more polished version of this that's only a chapter or possibly two sometime in the first week of September. I didn't really mean for this to become so long as it was, I just ran out of time/ideas for other things to write for the Challenge.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dying - 5/7" from AllenPitt
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hm, yes the First Slayer won't be too happy about this. One possession per customer! There just might be more of a struggle than it expects. Too bad Giles hasn't seen the coin. He might recognize it, even Angel might. And of course on the other end, if the Wardens find out about it, they'll be in a "kill on sight" mood...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Living 3/7" from Hecatonchires
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Shame she can't wear it as a necklace.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Living 3/7" from AllenPitt
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that is a question--no dreams in advance warning her? I guess the next question is, will it be as easy to take her over as the demon thinks? After all, the slayer already HAS a demon (essence?) inside of her, that's why she's a slayer. This might be like the "Eyghon tries to possess Angel" scene where it turns out that "it's crowded in there already!"... That might be kind of funny....
Then, it takes a while for it to get full control... she might retain enough to tell Giles what's happening. Meanwhile if word gets out in the supernatural community she's going to have the White Council & their wardens on her.
Funny though: this is like the "hey I've got a mask. It raises the dead! Isn't it pretty?" scene from S3..
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rising - 2/7" from (Recent Donor)kribby
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This is some well planned (and well written) scary shit! Thanks for posting! It's times like these I wish I hadn't hooked friends on The Dresden Files books and consequently given them all away....

Sigh.

Thanks for the entertainment!
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning - 1/7" from Selori
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That's just too, too scary. This is the circumstance that the phrase "nothing good can come of this" was invented for, eh?
Review By [Selori] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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