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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KyrissDraconis
Review:
Tons of fun to read...almost wished it were longer.
Comments from author:
Hm, since the feedback I may add a chapter of Xander going into the firehouse and such.
Review By [KyrissDraconis] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Yes, it read more like and outline than a real story, but you still made me laugh. All I could think of when Xander came up with his solution was the possibility of making the world's biggest smore. Lol! I hope there will be more or a nice rewrite someday.
Comments from author:
Since the feedback has been so good, I've decided to add another chapter. It will probably be Xander "Entering" the fire house an joining the G.B.'s.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Infinix
Review:
Not to bad however you did write Hander Harris once instead of Xander Harris.
Comments from author:
Okay, I'll check it out, thanks for the offer.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from astrakage
Review:
It weould be interseting to read about the adventures that Xander had with the people mentione and the reactions they and the others in the series had to him. For example Integra, Ardeth, one of the halfbreed angels that Constantine deals with, ect.
Comments from author:
I probably will, however I don't know a lot about Constantine. I just watched the movie.
Review By [astrakage] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Lots of potential for offshoot stories, and great fun as it stands. One nitpick, it was O'Connell in The Mummy.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I probably will add more.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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