Kind of misleading to put it in this category, don't you think, not to mention claim it's a response to that challenge? Dreadful disappointment.
ETA: What I'm talking about is, this is not a pairing fic of any kind, and even if the sex was "onscreen," it'd be a stretch to call it slash, since you've implied that Andrew was a girl at the time and Harry had no inkling otherwise. It's an excuse for character-bashing with flimsy justification. And hey, whatever floats your boat, but I find it hard to believe that you think you were true to the spirit of the challenge. You deliberately presented the fic as something you know it's not.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure what you mean, it had slash in it,(even if it wasn't on screen), it had rings, little memory of the night before and they woke up together, the last requirement was optional, thus it fit all of the requirements of the challenge, therefore I'm not sure I not sure what you're talking about.
Review By [janeaverage] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [1 out of 10]
The idea of Andrew and ANYONE is kinda nauseating. That said, nice. ^_^ Oh, and MAJOR points for;
**Andrew couldn’t help a slight smile as he shook his head, “I’m afraid not, it’s a magical contract, till death do us part and all that.”
Harry glanced at Dawn then back at Andrew, before doing the only thing he could think of to fix the situation, he pointed his wand at Andrew, “Avada Kedavra, evanesco.” He turned his wand on the marriage license. “Evanesco.”**
I thought I was gonna fall in the floor laughing! ^_^ ^_^ Great Job!
Comments from author:
Hey Harry was drunk and looking at Dawn. Andrew was the villain, I figured it was a good solution. And yes I'll agree that the idea of anyone and Andrew is creepy. I liked that part of it a lot as well.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]