oh dear ....
what a situation ...

Oh man... a follow up to this would be insane. Like, awesome.

Nice. That's just how they would think and react. This could easily be extended either as a series or a much longer story.

Wow!

Interesting. And, poor Abby. :(

What struck me the most is how giving a victim some "Forget-Ade" could lead to possible consequences for the 'saviors' after the fact.

(BTW, how would they know for sure the ashes were Abby's so quickly? There's nothing to indicate how far back Tim 'forgot'.)

*WARNING* The following review was created by a tired, self-appointed "Grammar Cop". Take it with a grain of salt.

Nice story, but it needs some editing. Lots of grammatical errors or typos.

E.g.,

> When the doorbell run

> He could almost the synapses

> She said smiling a tooth grin

> A man with an eye patch barged in and was wilding a water pistol

Thank you, I just wrote it today and there are only so many errors I can catch the first time around! I actually just finished editing the second mistake when I saw the review. I went over it once again and fixed it as best as I could. I really hate when I catch my grammar mistakes, especially since I know better. I actually think I'm getting better and writing fewer but no one is perfect.

Anyways, I'm going to go over this again tomorrow and hopefully catch some more once my mind doesn't see what I want to see.

Oh, this was *painful* I hope there's more in this series, because the NCIS crew is definitely capable of finding Xander, but the Scoobies are equally capable of busting him out of jail again. This story reads like the first step to an utter trainwreck. Very good work.