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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from deathgeonous
Review:
I loved what you did to Ol' Voldie. Great job with that. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that it was amusing.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from deathgeonous
Review:
I was going to read some of you other fics, and then I noticed this one, and though, "Huh, why not?" Fun fic. So, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from evilredknight
Review:
So I get it's a 21 year old in a 11 year old body.
But I have to ask.
The visual you draw is still on a girl in a 16 year old body having sex with a girl in an 11 year old body.
How is that not kiddie porn?
Especially as it has no real literary or social comment value unlike say... 'Lolita'?
This isn't really a flame, and I am not a censorist.
I really am curios how you justify that visual. And considering what it is, shouldn't you have to?
Comments from author:
I'm not sure it's supposed to be justified, explained or made okay. It is what it is, two girls with lives that aren't exactly normal finding comfort in another.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SamDragon
Review:
So different,so funny.
Comments from author:
I happen to like different :) And hey funny is always nice.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [13 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Rune
Review:
Tommy will wish he was killed by Harry before long. See an easy way around the stupid prophesy. Maybe only Harry can kill the snake but who says killing him is the best thing to do? Banishing works well too, or is it kidnapping or something this time?
Comments from author:
It's the idea that there are far far worse things than death.
Review By [Rune] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from arkeus
Review:
heh
Review By [arkeus] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
Interesting, quick, but interesting. Some parts seemed a bit rushed, however it was an interesting answer to this challenge.
Comments from author:
I can see how it could be said that it was too quick in parts. Maybe a touch rushed, still it was fun to work on and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! For some reason I missed this story when you first posted it. I am very glad I finally read it. I thought it was cute, amusing, and had some parings I've never read before. I hope there will be more someday.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure, it was fun to write. I'm not really sure when I'll get around to writing more on it but I probably should get back around to it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dapsy
Review:
Huh.. what?... I mean... where is a sequel? I swear... I thought I saw it somewhere... maybe under the table, uhmm.. was I wrong? I mean this is totally sequelworthy.
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
HUHH?? Thats all? Sorry, it is a nice story, but I really thought it would be longer
Comments from author:
I hear that a lot. Thanks for the review though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Millaros
Review:
It is quite a good story, but truth to be told, i was actually hoping Buffy would get into Slytherin.

To spice up the story a little bit.

This isn't a flame or anything!

Have a nice day!
Comments from author:
Ah, yes yes, I can understand that. There are three reasons I didn't place her there. Not only would it have been out of character for her, she's muggleborn thus wouldn't qualify and third the challenge said Gryffindor. So that sort of tied my hands on such things. She's too much of a hero to end up in slytherin. Though it is sort of amusing thinking about placing her in HufflePuff and having her have to sneak into the Gryffindor dorms or other areas she isn't supposed to to be with Hermione. So yes while interesting.. it wasn't to be. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [Millaros] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)CrashxBurn
Review:
Well, I'm a bit disappointed that it ended so quickly and that the plot was a little rushed, but it was a cute story to read. It would've been more enjoyable given more time for development, but it was good nonetheless. Thank you for answering my challenge :)

Ciao!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It felt a little rushed at the end. But over all I liked it. Thank you for offering such a fun challenge.
Review By [(Past Donor)CrashxBurn] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
awesome pairings! Looking forward to how the year will turn out.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
Excellent update *grin* Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. Hopefully the next chapter will be out before too long.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from soulfulone
Review:
ok i find this strangely interesting, and all of it kinda makes a sense that's "not quite", kinda like this not quite earth logic....anyway, don't take this as a flame b/c its not...just way more outta the box than i expected.....now what's throwing me was the last scene with both Buffy and Hermione in reflection of their feelings....cause we're still talking a 5 ye age difference, currently in Hermione's favor....it just appears to moving too fast...is all i'm saying....and question: did Buffy retain her slayer powers? Cause even in the comics they had slayers as young as 11/12 after the activation spell.....and how come Faith, now the senior slayer is over in Hogwarts rather than helping Giles with the New Watcher's Council????
Comments from author:
As for the moving to fast, they are both a bit confused right now and are taking solace in sleeping in the same bed. As for Buffy yeah, she's still got her slayer powers. Faith is in England at Sirius's home because he's hot and she's also making her that things are on the up and up. Xander is helping with the potentials. Faith will probably be back there before too long, but they saved the world they deserve a break for a bit.
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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