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Review of chapter "Why is it always me?" from eternalfox
Review:
To answer your Buffy time line question. I graduated Class of 1999 from high school. Buffy began when I was a sophomore in Fall 1996/ Spring 1997; coincidentally, they were in their sophomore year as well. Also, Kylie, Eduardo, Garrett and Roland were in Egon's paranormal studies class at a local university, Eduardo leaving to go to another one makes no sense unless we're talking graduate school. If this is set after graduation, but before Buffy, Willow and Oz start UC Sunnydale...then it would make Kylie and the others juniors or seniors in college. Making them at least 3-5 years older than Xander. The Real Ghostbusters ran from Sept 1986 to Sept 1991. The Extreme Ghostbusters ran from Sept 1997 to Dec 1999. Now Janine is a lot older than Xander, she was in her late 20's in the first 2 movies. The first show ran for 5 years, then a 6 year gap, then 2 years and a few months for Extreme...if it's after the Mayor, it's 3. Janine would be in her late 30s, probably close to 40. Egon and the guys were a couple of years older than her...so I'm thinking mid 40s to about 50. Xander having a crush on Janine....and visiting Peter would have occurred when he was 10 or 11. Which is kinda pushing it, it would mean he visited them the year prior or the year they retired.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the witches lair...." from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Interesting story idea. There are a few mistakes here and there, but nothing too bad. The story itself seems to be moving to fast. It shouldn't be GB's go in, GB's beast ghost, GB's leave. There needs to be some substance in between. Hope to see more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the witches lair...." from slmncpm
Review:
*laughs* i like it dear!
Comments from author:
Cool, send me an email please I don't remember if I replied to your last one, but I want to know your opinion on something.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the witches lair...." from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Cool beans. i like this.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the witches lair...." from JediKnight
Review:
Great work, hoping for more soon.
Comments from author:
Maybe, hoopefully.

This stories getting less reviews than two of my other stories so that dictates they get updated first.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Why is it always the hot goths?" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Why is it always the hot goths?" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun view of how Xander's luck just keeps on giving.
Comments from author:
Yups, I couldn't resist, I was trying to think of where to go with the story, and suddenly it hit me, Spider's lay eggs, their was a female spider demon in the place for at least fifty years. Surely she laid eggs at least ounce.

Plus I'm thinking about maybe one surviving and having it fight one of the Mantis demon's offspring for trying to kill Xander who killed it's mother.

But that will probably end up on the cutting room floor.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 in the pot, ready to go!" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another fun chapter, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 in the pot, ready to go!" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on your story, I'm hoping you'll be adding more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We came WE SAW" from DKoepp
Review:
Interesting Story so far, though I was a little confused on what year this story was taking place in until I reread it. It might help to actually mention that to help clear the confusion. Other then that, I am looking forward to see where you are going with this.
Comments from author:
I'm pretty sure I mentioned it in one of the authors note, but I may not have. I was alive during 1998, but I don't' remember the technology well enough ((I was eight at the time)) to represent it accurately.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DKoepp] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We came WE SAW" from eriktheviking
Review:
I've never seen the cartoon, but it was a well written story, thanks.
Comments from author:
Your welcome, and thanks for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We came WE SAW" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the new story so far, but it seems like the ghost they went after in chapter 1 wasn't the one they busted in chapter 2. Please add more to this story soon.
Comments from author:
Heh, thanks. I will, and I kind of wanted them to forget that. I'll be getting to it in the next chapter or two.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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