TtH • Reviews • Under the Hot African Sun

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf

Review:

You have done a good job with this story and I hope you get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny some Smörgåstårta (Sandwich cake)::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria

Review:

I like this.

Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj

Review:

Cool! I like it!

Comments from author:

Awesome! Thanks!

Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Infinix

Review:

A simple well done one shot is quite often even more satisfying and entertaining than your average longer story with twists, turns and drama. This is one of those. In a few months I'll stumble over this again during a lull in the updates of my normally tracked stories and I will find it just as enjoyable as it was this time.

Comments from author:

What a lovely thing to say! Thank you.

Review By [Infinix] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chickalupe

Review:

OMG, how do you do it? You made me like gen-fic. I *HATE* gen-fic... normally. But this? Awesome. Very. Xander is so in character and I actually went "aww" at the het!woobies between Bill and Fleur. Keep up the good work!

Comments from author:

I hate gen-fic too!! I don't know what's been happening to me! I just hope it stops soon.

Review By [Chickalupe] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking

Review:

A well done snapshot of Xander in Africa, thanks.

PS One typo Bill Heasley.

Comments from author:

Oops. Thanks!
:)

Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku

Review:

Lovely :)

Comments from author:

Thank you :)

Review By [Ansku] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Not Rated

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