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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from twlight
Review:
Normally I give 10's but the chapters are just soooo very short so you got docked as the chapters seem to be lacking a bit and seem to be like teasers rather then real chapters. I do hope that you are able to update this again soon.
Review By [twlight] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from skabs
Review:
It's Faith right? I haven't seen a Sentinal Crossover with Faith as the Guide before. It's interesting, but I feel you could put a little more depth into your character's diolouge... or maybe we're just not up to the talking yet. Descriptions are good, and your story easy to follow.
I hope you update soon! I'm hooked! (I'd be waiting at the edge of my seat if I wasn't lying on my tummy right now! ^_^)
Review By [skabs] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from tonisimone
Review:
Interesting start.

I'd like to see where you take it.

toni
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from slmncpm
Review:
i can't wait to see more of this. hurry please?
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Glad to see another chapter of this!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from spring
Review:
Oh boy, this might not be good for Xander. I love these chapters just like every other. I look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I'm not at all sure what direction I'm going in here... but hopefully there will be a new chapter very soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from kayron
Review:
She wants her senses back, so that means that she needs Blair. That howling hyena has got to be Xander. So that means that he will probably try to stop her. Even without her senses, Alex is still dangerous. She's ruthless, desperate, and quite willing to kill. Another thing that she has in her favor is that Xander is the type who is protective of females. He might have a hard time fighting her off. Even though he does know that women can be just as deadly, in some cases more deadly, than males. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
She's definitely coming for Blair, and the hyena is definitely Xander. That's about all I know for certain though. I'm still working on it!
:)
Review By [kayron] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Ansku
Review:
Ominous :)
Comments from author:
It is a little, isn't it?
:)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from kaleecat
Review:
You know, Jim is a moron. Last time he didn't tell Blair about the visions & Blair ended up dead. Again visions, and again, he doesn't tell Blair. Idiot. I hope your Xander saves Blair, kicks Alex's ass & knocks sense into Jim before driving off in the sunset together.
Comments from author:
It's totally true. Jim's not really the brightest crayon in the box sometimes.
:)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from kayron
Review:
I was right! Alex Barnes is coming. If Jim isn't there to help Blair, maybe Xander will be there. Thanks for the update!
Comments from author:
No, problem! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from churkey
Review:
Now I know why everyone complained about how short my chapters are!

This is hard when you're all full of suspense and stuff (great job on building the suspense, by the way).
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! My chapters are normally much longer, so you have that to look forward to when August is over.
Review By [churkey] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm really enjoying this!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad! Thanks for commenting!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ansku
Review:
Nice :)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Ansku] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LNR
Review:
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Longer!!!
Comments from author:
lol! I know the chapters are all so short right now, because they're also entries for the fic-a-day challenge, but once it's over, chapters should go back to my usual length.
Review By [LNR] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Ansku
Review:
Nice going :)
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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