It's Faith right? I haven't seen a Sentinal Crossover with Faith as the Guide before. It's interesting, but I feel you could put a little more depth into your character's diolouge... or maybe we're just not up to the talking yet. Descriptions are good, and your story easy to follow. I hope you update soon! I'm hooked! (I'd be waiting at the edge of my seat if I wasn't lying on my tummy right now! ^_^)
Review By [skabs] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Oh boy, this might not be good for Xander. I love these chapters just like every other. I look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I'm not at all sure what direction I'm going in here... but hopefully there will be a new chapter very soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
She wants her senses back, so that means that she needs Blair. That howling hyena has got to be Xander. So that means that he will probably try to stop her. Even without her senses, Alex is still dangerous. She's ruthless, desperate, and quite willing to kill. Another thing that she has in her favor is that Xander is the type who is protective of females. He might have a hard time fighting her off. Even though he does know that women can be just as deadly, in some cases more deadly, than males. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
She's definitely coming for Blair, and the hyena is definitely Xander. That's about all I know for certain though. I'm still working on it! :)
Review By [kayron] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
You know, Jim is a moron. Last time he didn't tell Blair about the visions & Blair ended up dead. Again visions, and again, he doesn't tell Blair. Idiot. I hope your Xander saves Blair, kicks Alex's ass & knocks sense into Jim before driving off in the sunset together.
Comments from author:
It's totally true. Jim's not really the brightest crayon in the box sometimes. :)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
lol! I know the chapters are all so short right now, because they're also entries for the fic-a-day challenge, but once it's over, chapters should go back to my usual length.
Review By [LNR] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]