very nice little ficlet. I've always liked Michael's penchant for youghurt, and I love the thought of that of all things being the impetus for him getting Sam to check out Willow. Somehow, I think he'd consider a steady supply of youghurt worth even opening up that can of worms.
Review By [VenusdeMolly] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Nice writing and the monologue sections, but wouldn't it be much easier for Willow & Co. to go around to the closest CostCos, Sams Clubs, and Walmarts to buy multiple whole shipping pallets of yogurt cases at a time?
If Michael is that desperate for a yogurt, and the nearby larger grocery stores are out, many local convenience stores and gas/food stations should also have a few major brand varieties available. Why go to so much trouble?
Review By [Kremer] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]