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Review of chapter "Family" from Waverly
Review:
I loved this. Excellent job, I love how you waited til the end to reveal Victor's identity.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I wanted the reveal to have more of an impact which is why I waited till the end and tried to paint such a domestic picture. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from WingedSeraph
Review:
Fantastic story you've done with Victor; I never really enjoyed reading about him until now. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! Victor was fascinating to me, but then I love the more ambiguous characters and once I learned his background and saw this FFA I had to combine the two. Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [WingedSeraph] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from AngelBlack
Review:
I'm kind of confused..
Comments from author:
About?
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
I enjoyed this story am teary eyed sniffle ...
Rory:)
Comments from author:
*hands you a tissue* Glad you liked it and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from GreySerenitatis
Review:
Aww, poor Victor. I loved his character on Burn Notice. Glad to see a short fic featuring him. =]
Comments from author:
I liked his character too. He deserves more fics featuring him. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [GreySerenitatis] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Very, very good!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from BillieBog
Review:
Didn't see it coming and it was so sad. Loved the Victor episodes of course.

Thanks so much,
BB
Comments from author:
I loved them too. Shanks did a good job with that particular character and I was sad to see him go even if it was a spectacular ending to that character. Glad you liked this and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from (Past Donor)polgara
Review:
*shivers* Poor Victor. To see a tiny slice of what he had lost. *cuddles him*



Pol
Comments from author:
He did lose a great deal and I did kinda turn the knife a little, didn't I? Whoops.
Review By [(Past Donor)polgara] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
Review:
Out-bloody-standing! Wow. First of all Victor's storyline broke my heart on Burn Notice. Then to throw Buffy into the mix as his wife, with all she managed to survive as the Slayer... *sniff*... I need a kleenex. Whether he plays Daniel, Victor, or someone else; Michael Shanks is a pleasure to watch. He always captures my attention. Loved this story and Buffy being interwoven so beautifully.
Comments from author:
His story did explain a lot about his actions and reactions to Michael and the situation they both found themselves in and I do so love that he went a bit crazy. Shanks did do a wonderful job with this character and made him memorable. I suppose there's no greater compliment to give an actor. Glad you liked this sweetie and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
*is speechless
Comments from author:
Score! That means my work here is done. ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Awwww....

And they have a son.... Awwwww.....

Edited for: *more awwwwwing and some sniffles*
Comments from author:
Yeah, sniffles would be appropriate. Though I think it's odd that no one mentioned that I named the kid after Xander...
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from KnightOwl
Review:
That was really good! And sad when you know what's coming. I was thinking most of the time that it was Michael but then when she said his name it really made sense.
Comments from author:
Thank you and yeah, this one isn't going to end well. I'm glad the misdirection worked and that the ending made sense even though it was a slight twist - or at least it was suppose to be a twist. ;) Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from alexceasar
Review:
OMG! This is exactly what I was looking for when I made the suggestion for the FFA. Thank you. It was so wonderful. I totally started reading it thinking somehow it was supposed to be Michael and them you hit me with Victor and it totally blew me away. It completely fits in with the only known history of Victor on the show. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Only possible compliant is it is not 100 pages longer. :)

P.S. I am loving these Burn Notice stories you are writing. Please continue. Please, cherries on top.
Comments from author:
Yay! Happy to oblidge. *beams* I saw the FFA and this was the first thing I thought of and it wouldn't let up so I sat down and wrote it out. I liked Victor even when he was the 'bad' guy and though his back story did make my heart hurt. Poor guy and now poor Buffy. ;)

There should be more. I think there's more. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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