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Joey in the Magic Box

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Review of chapter "Joey in the Magic Box" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cute and in character, but not much in the way of a plot... more like a "meet and greet." Also I wasn't sure if Joey was driving and arriving at the magic box during the day or the night.
Comments from author:
There didn't up being much of a plot was there? My best friend wasn't as into this story as the other one we wrote and I guess it showed. It was at night, I should have thrown in something like Buffy was illuminated by the street lights as she passed Joey. But that was why the gas station and almost everything else was closed right then.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joey in the Magic Box" from CPTSkip
Review:
I was so hoping Joey could have an 'experience' in Sunnydale so the rest of his Friends could make fun of him for the next ten years when he tries to explain it to them. Oh, well. Your story was nice and any story with Anya having a bunny attack is always of the Good.
Comments from author:
When my best friend threw out the idea of Joey learning a magic trick, I had to put in Anya's bunny-phobia. ^_~ She and I had to trouble agreeing on some of the stuff since she hasn't gotten to season 5 yet and I've only seen a couple episodes of Friends, but I think it ended up being good.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joey in the Magic Box" from phlogistics
Review:
An interesting idea. In places, I could practically hear the Friends studio audience laughing (which is kind of odd, but oh well).
Comments from author:
*hehe* Thanks. My best friend and I had to do a lot of discussing on this fic. She knows Friends much better than me and I know Buffy much better than her so we each had our sections to work mainly on. ^-^
Review By [phlogistics] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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