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Review of chapter "Strawberries" from DoubleKross
Review:
I don't think you really made the connection very clear between the two--Willow's magic "tastes" like strawberries and Kaylee really likes strawberries...?
Comments from author:
You are right, of course. But it just didn't seem to want more defined explanation. So I wrote what needed to be written.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DoubleKross] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strawberries" from Thedruid
Review:
Uh ok. Don't really see the connection there between the first and second scene, other than the mere presence of stratberries......

Even going to do more with that 'balance Willow' story?
Comments from author:
The word strawberry, in a completely non-BtVS context, managed to link the quote from Rack and Kaylee's love for the fruit in my mind.

The link is the suggestion that Kaylee is the reincarnation of Willow.


Unfortunately my writing seems to be limited to short bursts of inspiration which tends to mean that my stories are short. So it is unlikely that an update will be forthcoming.

Of course, if someone else was inspired and wanted to expand on a story... just ask :)


And thanks for taking the time to review.


Jewel
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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