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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from hamrensel
Review:
Even as short as this is it is still one of my favorite Unfinished LotR/Buffy crossovers. I really wished that you would have finished it. Hopefully some day.
Review By [hamrensel] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Vickzie
Review:
Aww ths story is so sad but sweet. Hope you update more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from bradsan
Review:
I agree with twoblackdragons.
I always thought that slayers are immortal. They all died young in combat or at their eighteen birthday in the test where their powers will be taken. I also think that on a certain age they won't age anymore because an old body can't fight.

I always found it strange that the watchers would kill their own warriors but I think that the reason could be their immortality and becoming to old to control and with more power then the watchers want their slayers to have.

Buffy became stronger after her first and second dead and the evil she defeated became stronger the longer she fights. Just like a vampire they become stronger the older they get to defeat them the slayer has to become more powerful.

I Really wish you would update this one.
Don't forget to write an interlude where Whistler yells at the Scoobies. You can write that one when you are really, really mad. You could put everything in that story, good therapy."LOL"
Review By [bradsan] • Date [23 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Kalliza
Review:
So, with the BluRay coming out and those one-night-only theater showings of the extended trilogy, I suddenly got this urge to see what people did with LOTR/BtVS crossovers. I've found a lot of good ones so far, and I gotta say this one has lots of promise. My fav part of just about any fic is the character interactions and the relationships that develop. That being said, this is the first time I've seen the "Buffy gets adopted by Elves" thing being done with Glorfindel. I love it. Relationships with him tend to be amusing, but him taking her under his wing just makes so much *sense*.

I also love a good romance, and there are so many options for Buffy, really. (I've only seen the Eomer/Buffy pairing done once so far, for example.) Can you imagine a prospective boyfriend needing to ask permission of THE Balorg Slayer to court his ONLY daughter?

I have thought on a few occasions that it makes sense for the Slayer to have a longer than average lifespan, too. I'm thinking Wolverine here 'cause of her healing abilities. Maybe not Immortal, but certainly long lived. Plus, the whole "resurrection pulled her from the mortal coil" idea. Maybe a combination of the two.

My one and only real request is that it doesn't become a "third wheel" fic, where Buffy's just along for the ride for the entire original (and unchanged) story. Give her something uniquely Slayery to do/fight.

Overall, I'm looking forward to seeing where this story decides to go, and hope you update soon!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
Hello,
I love this story so far and I hope you decide to update again even though it has been awhile. I love how you write Buffy in this story so far. Please please please update again and soon. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [13 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AbeEllis
Review:
Just read this for the first time! (strange how the best stories can elude you sometimes?!)
I really think you should continue this story!
Sadly this story has been on hiatus for over a year.
I believe it would be the perfect time to continue this story now that I have finally found it :D
Comments from author:
Lol--I actually AM working on the next chapter. Sadly, my computer had a slight run-in with a three-year-old and soda, and it IS a laptop so... yeah. The Computer Medics in town (yes, that is what they really call themselves) managed to save it and everything on it, so I still had my notes, and now that I have some time, I can get back to writing. I'm hoping to have something up for this story within a few weeks, though I can't promise it--internet's been dodgy in my entire area of late. First time I've managed to get on in WEEKS that didn't directly involve work.
Review By [AbeEllis] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from bradsan
Review:
I love this story. read it four times.
I hope for a pairing buffy/legolas and that she is immortal.
I hope that you will show the reaction from the scoobies when Whistler tells them. Hope you make a angry Whistler.
Comments from author:
No pairings in this story, allthough the slightly better-planned-out second will have one. Good idea for an interlude, by the way. I'll see if I can get something like that up.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from PhoenixFuryFire
Review:
I love it.
Buffy would be hesitant about trusting people again after being betrayed by the Scoobies. I think she would grab this chance for a new life, to start over with both hands. To be herself, not what others expect or try to mould or make her be.
Glorfindel is great, he would be a good Ada for her. She needs a father figure - one who’s actually around and won’t leave. Unconditional love and support. Her real father was never round and Giles betrayed her more then once and left her when she needed him the most.
I can see Arwen and her family becoming her family too. Buffy and Arwen ganging up on the twins and starting a prank war and being grounded by their fathers (though I can imagine the girls wrapping their fathers around their little fingers with a pout and big eyes).
I’m looking forward to watching her adapt to her life in Middle-Earth, learning to ride could be fun and good bonding with her new Ada.
Please, please, please, please, I beg, I plead write MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
^_^ I'm working on it, though I haven't had time to sit down and write in a while. Next chapter's about half finished, though, so when I DO get some time, I should be able to get it completed fairly quickly. Thinking of time--I really shouldn't even be on this site, with my general lack of it.
Review By [PhoenixFuryFire] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
I think that slayers are immortal in that they can't die other than by violence. I think it's inherent in the magic that makes slayers, slayers. As a matter of fact I think their apparent age, regardless how old they actually are, would be between 18 and 30.

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Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Comments from author:
Interesting. Not a theory I'd heard before, and not the one for this story, but intersting nonetheless. And I AM working on it, promise.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kittenpoker
Review:
Love the story and the tone you present it in- please continue?
Comments from author:
Thank you, and, yes, the story is still in-progress. As I have warned several others, my updates are sporadic at best, with anywhere between a day and several months between updates, depending on levels of inspiration and time to write.

The next chapter is begun, and it should not be TOO much longer before it gets posted.
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [16 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Kittysgotclaws
Review:
wow. I just kind of stumbled over this story, but it's really great.. so please update again soon:)
Comments from author:
I'll try. I warn you, though, I am notoriously slow at best. Though I occasionally get bursts of inspiration wherein updates will happen on a nearly daily basis for a short time, most of my updates come with weeks or months between.
Review By [Kittysgotclaws] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Emeraldfire
Review:
Really beautiful story so far...
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks.
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Krysstinia
Review:
I like this so far. Just a couple questions, though.

1.) When in the LotR verse does this take place?

2.) Is there going to be a pairing?
Comments from author:
Takes place before the Fellowship by... oh, a year or two. I wasn't being too specific.

No pairing this story. Next story, there will be.
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CassiopeiaHastur
Review:
"Glori" :) pure buffiness
Comments from author:
^_^
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Swordstress
Review:
I love the fatherly relationship that's developing. Buffy really needs it.

And good was of foreshadowing what's to come with that last line! :)
Comments from author:
^_^ Glad you're enjoying it. I thought Buffy needed a proper father... and glad you liked my last line. True, though, isn't it?
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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