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Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from ShyBob
Review:
Okay, this is the kind of dialogue I aspire to write. Though short, the lines are not choppy, and have good pacing. Plus, great job using broad outlines and letting the reader's mind fill in the blanks.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from spring
Review:
love this
Review By [spring] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from SamDragon
Review:
Interesting and different.Love to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Not sure exactly where it's going yet, but when I know, you will.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from nemogbr
Review:
Good start to a story.

Will check out JediButtercup's end of the story...
http://jedibuttercup.livejournal.com/60147.html?view=1827315#t1827315

Fascinating how people end up with the same plot bunnies. If we could just have more people writing and more time to write..lol
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice short fic and I surley hope you plan to add to this
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from Bobboky
Review:
sweet work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from powellt
Review:
I would love to see this made into a larger fic revolving around this world. Also if I remember correctly there is a one shot that came out shortly after BB came out that covers the either finishing or middle of the reconstructing of Wane Manner overseen by Xander that would fit with this if you can find it and get the author to allow you to use it.(Title: Inherited Business Author: Jedi Buttercup)
After reading some of your other reviews I've got to add that I love your ironic use of the phrase "Like a house on fire", in that setting.
Comments from author:
I don't know if I will revisit this at some point in the future or not. I don't want to step on JediButtercup's toes since she already covered the Slayers helping aspect, so I'll probably stick to the Xander/Alfred and Xander/Bruce interaction if I do.
Thanks for the comment about "like a house on fire", I was starting to think I'd completely missed the mark with that!
Review By [powellt] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from BluLadyK
Review:
And by complete you mean only until chapter two comes out. :-)

Interesting start, I really look forward to more in the rebuilding Wayne Manor saga. ::hint hint::
Comments from author:
If the inspiration strikes, there will be more. If not...I don't like to force it, as the end result never turns out as well.
Review By [BluLadyK] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from eriktheviking
Review:
A great concept, well written, but perhaps not the best turn of phrase from Alfred considering why the rebuilding is required. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Please continue. I like your insights on Alfred as viewed by Xander. Would Alfred trained the young Bruce Wayne in supernatural survival basics... either through stories or explicitly?
Comments from author:
I'm honestly not sure if there will be more or not, but I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from dreameralways
Review:
Lovely. Absolutely lovely.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from alexceasar
Review:
I really like it. Who better to helm him rebuilding it. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from MavenAlysse
Review:
ohhhh... I liked this, alot. I do hope you have plans for a sequel. I agree with Alfred - Xander and Mr. Wayne will get on like a house on fire. It looks to be an interesting working relationship.

Thanks for sharing!

-Maven Alysse
Comments from author:
I'm not sure at this point if there will be a sequel, but I am glad to hear you liked it!
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Scratch Your Back..." from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I enjoyed this idea! I hope we get to see what happens with the finished product.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It may be a little while before I revisit this, it all depends on when inspiration strikes.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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