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Review of chapter "The End" from Kristal
Review:
Oh! And it's over? Really? That's disappointing! Well, the ending was good, but that there is no more is disappointing. I have loved my angst fix lately and you've done quite well with being my supplier. If you ever feel like adding more or you know, writing more angsty fics, I'd love to read them! Anyway, thanks for putting this up on the site and for being quite a brilliant writer!
Comments from author:
Yeah, i just felt it needed to end and i had a whole dramatic plot planned but it didnt feel right and this did and so..the end. But of course there will be other stories, i aim to please, thank you fo reading!

Ali
Review By [Kristal] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hearts Lie Bleeding" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Ohhhh boy!
Comments from author:
:-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Invisible" from Missingviolet
Review:
Oh no! Wat will happen to faith? This is so sad! Wil the scoobies come to faithy's rescue and teach potter a lession?
Comments from author:
Faith is a strong, guess youll just have to keep reading to see what happens ;-p thanks for the review
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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There is only one success - to be able
to spend your life in your own way.
- Christopher Morley
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible" from Waverly
Review:
Oh, ouuuuuuuch. Well done. So painful.
Comments from author:
pain is love, it'll be okay
Review By [Waverly] • Date [11 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible" from Kristal
Review:
Jeez! You are such a cruel person! And that was very short! But yeah, keep up with the angst! Continue ASAP! WRITE NOW!
Comments from author:
you like it, lol i did there is another chapter already up
Review By [Kristal] • Date [11 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
OOOh chilling, but way to short. :(
Comments from author:
thats all the muse would permit, it was longer and i didnt like it so i cut it back down, thanks for reading!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [11 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fear" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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The ocean is a mighty harmonist.
- William Wordsworth
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fear" from Taisy
Review:
That last paragraph.... Ouch. A few little typos in this one. Can't wait for the next one.

Thanks for the entertaining read.
Comments from author:
Sorry i will go over it again, thanks for reading hun! the next shall be out soon.

Ali
Review By [Taisy] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fear" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Oh boy, the shit is gonna hit the fan now isn't it. good chap. will Faith go balistic when she finds out or does she somehow know already.
Comments from author:
She knows that Harry cheated, she doesnt know about the child.. dun dun dun....


Ali
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [5 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Soup" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
I am so very speechless right now. Why you go and do something like that, I was so hoping that they would be able to get beyond the indiscretion until that last line. :( whaaah. I can't wait for the next chap.
Comments from author:
who KNOWS what will happen love, :) Fat is mysterious and muses are FICKLE lol LOVE LOVE LOVE

Ali
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Soup" from Kristal
Review:
Oh jeez! You're horrid! So mean!
Comments from author:
I LOVE U TOO HUN, MORE IS ON THE WAY :)
Review By [Kristal] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Soup" from Taisy
Review:
Ack! You can't leave it here. I just found this and it's too short and too cliffy and I just want to throw myself out of my chair and bawl. Great job! I really like the style and feel of this one. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the heartbreaking read.
Comments from author:
YOUR WELCOME, AND OF COURSE IT WON'T STAY THERE SILLYFACE. IM HOPING I CAN ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER BEFORE NEXT WEEK.

LOVE AND HEARTS
ALI
Review By [Taisy] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Soup" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Hot and Sour Soup::

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Those who will not reason, are bigots,
those who cannot, are fools,
and those who dare not, are slaves.
- Lord Byron
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tears" from Waverly
Review:
Beautifully done. I love it. I hope Faith doesn't get back with Harry, though.
Comments from author:
The human heart is a fickle thing, i have no idea what she'll do i dont think she does either, thanks for reading hun! :-)
Review By [Waverly] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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