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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Fun one shot.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great one-shot. But I'd leave it at that. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I probably will.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
An interesting and enjoyable story but the spelling/typos were distracting.
Comments from author:
Yeah sorry about that, I'm trying to find a beta but it's hard to find a good one.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from griffindorgirl
Review:
This is a great story. I would love to read more stories about Alexander 'Pack Man' Harris. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks maybe someday.
Review By [griffindorgirl] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting job on the story, but seems a little too depressing at the end.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I wanted it to only be a one shot though and this just seemed like if I left it open various ideas woudl keep comming and so I felt I shoudl wrap it up and not just let it die off.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
Review:
Very interesting ... I really enjoyed this fic. Nice xander story. Its a lot of fun.
Comments from author:
Thanks and thanks for the review
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
Great Xander fic, and love GI Joe it was well written an I'd like to read more.
Go Joe! Rory :)
Comments from author:
Thanks maybe someday I'll get another bunny.
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)wolframhart
Review:
Enjoyed the story. One small nitpik, sorry. At the end, you said 20 words on tombstone. I counted 19. Would love to see more.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was planning to add another one but it kind of got left out because while I though it was cool looking at it realistically it was stupid.

Maybe someday something will come to me.
Review By [(Past Donor)wolframhart] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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