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Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from Redline
Review:
I am blown away! I have not read a story I enjoyed this much in years. please, Please, PLEASE if at all possible, could we have some more please.
Review By [Redline] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Whaaaaaah! Whaaaaaaah! I just finished reading it and I know it could be a while before there is more, WHAAAAAAAH! Sniffle, sniffle....
Ideas: 1) Xander Parker listens carefully to the discussion and then goes out on his own and kills the bugger with a sniper attack. It is Xander, after all...
2) The Ticonderoga gets rifted to Babylon IV at the height of the war against the shadows... The heck with letting it die down to flare up in a 1000 years...
3) The Ticonderoga gets rifted to Shiar space in the middle of one of their many wars with Xmen on deck...
Take your pick, boss....
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It a Dog's World." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Bwah-hah-haah! Sargent Buffy Slaughter reporting for duty, sir!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One-New Avengers. New Rifts Earth." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Sniff! A Palladium Fan! I really miss playing in that mixed up verse... I'll never forget my first Bearman character, sniffle... I so miss those days of violence!
Comments from author:
Another one if those fics where real life took over and I had to stop.

Layed off.

Back to college. That sort of thing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath." from falsegod
Review:
ITS NOT BAD BUT ITS NOT GOOD EITHER YOU HAVE NO FOCUS AND YOUR PLOT IS RIDDLED WITH HOLES WORSE THAN SWISS CHEESE
Review By [falsegod] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from Shadowman
Review:
Good story. Lots has happened and lots more can still happen so i hope we will see more of this story soon
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from Godogma
Review:
For something thats supposedly Xander centered there's very little of Xander showing in any of the chapters I've read and you're jumping perspectives so many times he's merely one of a plethora of underdeveloped original characters with names from Sunnydale stuck on them stuffed into a strange version of Rifts earth.

None of the characters are working together anymore and you're basically showing off tiny segments of what I'd assume is your much larger metaplot, but its not interesting because we've had no time to become attached to any of the characters nor have we seen them grown beyond the point they started with other than making new toys and working at taking over the place.

I read until the section where you introduced Splynncryth, but honestly this story has more than begun to frustrate me, I can skip through whole segments and never even see the character's I was initially interested in because you keep introducing more and more and more characters and giving them tiny scenes.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Sorry it took so long to respond, but I have mid-terms at the moment.

You're right about the Xander focus. When I started out I had Xander as the main character in mind, but the story had a mind of it's own and quickly got away from me.

I'll see if I can't tighten it it up a bit and remove the Xander centered focus.

Thanks again for pointing this out.
Raf
Review By [Godogma] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapters.

::Gives the plot bunny a bowl of Borscht::

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Mother Nature is not sweet.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from Infinix
Review:
I think its good actually to see more of what the others are doing. If you really want a copy of Splynn Dimensional Market I have the .pdf which you can have.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
If you can send me the link to my email:
rafmere@gmail.com

I'll be doing a couple of new story arcs until I get reacquainted with the information.

Thanks again.
Raf
Review By [Infinix] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life with the New Avengers on Earth 616." from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Avengers." from cjcold
Review:
Nice to see more of this.

I don't have a problem with you going to another front of Rifts Earth. I am curious as to how the whole aftermath of the Vampire War is going on. Has the Coalition found out about the work Jenny has been doing with the other members in forming a new American alliance?

How are things in space going?

Should be intersting to see what Xander can do in Earth 616, though as I am not very familiar with that world so things were a little confusing. One possibility that would be nice would be for Xander to collect genetic samples and memory imprints for when he returns, more Avengers.

More soon please.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

I'll see what Xander can do.

For the rest they'll be covered in up coming chapters.

Raf.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sunaj open house." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I'm a little stuck with the current storyline.

I've been looking for the Splynn: Dimensional Market book, haven't been able to get any ref anywhere. Lost my copy and cannot find it.

I'm working on Stewie can do better until I can get a hold of the material from somewhere.

Raf.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunaj open house." from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Coconut rice::

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Sanity calms, but madness is more interesting.
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Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunaj open house." from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunaj open house." from BrinLondofive
Review:
Huh, I was wondering if this had been abandoned, glad to see it isn't!
Comments from author:
Nope.
Just was on a vacation, without access to a computer.

Raf.
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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