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The Knight Ranger

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Review of chapter "The Video" from Harry
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OK. Time to hope that things will make sense soon. Because this Tony and Jessica Harris do NOT mesh with what we have known of them for YEARS!
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Talk" from Harry
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So, W&H is the law firm? Why do I feel that this is NOT going to go well!
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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So, a Two Eyed Xander is heading for Angel Grove, eh? Time to see where this pans out.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Curse" from Harry
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Very interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more of this as it comes up.
Review By [Harry] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Curse" from Hanzo
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I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Curse" from Mwhahahaha
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This definatly looks like its going to be a very interesting story. I really can't wait to read more of this...I hope you come back to it soon!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Video" from Blackguard
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pretty interesting story so far, looking forward to where this goes.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Video" from XanderHalcyon
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Please update soon and maybe make the chapters a little longer.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Talk" from Jhawksun
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like it. please update soon.
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alestar
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For a start... First paragraph? Two years, not year. You don't need a comma after was, too many in the wrong place throw off the pacing of your story. Know should be no, they aren't the same word. Second paragraph? Same problem with more commas than you need, and you switch tenses from past to present. It should be re-grew, not re-grow. It's basically the same types of problems continuing on from there.

It makes it look like this was just jotted down too quickly and not cleaned up before posting. I'm not trying to be mean, but it really helps to look over things once or twice before posting them up. It's not like it's a long chapter, you shouldn't even really need a beta if they aren't going to go beyond a thousand words.

Just something to take into consideration, since I think this could be good.
Comments from author:
Thank you for you suggestions. I really appreciate them.
Review By [Alestar] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alestar
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The premise could be interesting, but you need to re-read your work before posting it. You have tenses wrong all over the place. Maybe get someone to read over it after you do, if you just don't see the errors throughout the work.

Good luck. Hope this turns into something fun, there are so few Rangers/BtVS crossovers out there.
Comments from author:
You will have to give me an example of what you mean. Otherwise, I will not know how to fix’s it.
Review By [Alestar] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
Please update! It's so hard to find good power ranger crossovers, especially ones involving Xander.
Comments from author:
Thank you; I do not know when I will update. I guess it depends on if I have the time. I only really post this to get it out of my head.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thegoddamnbatman
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Looks like an interesting story, and thank you for making a power rangers crossover! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review and your welcome for the power rangers crossover.
Review By [Thegoddamnbatman] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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