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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [24 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from megan
Review:
This is a really great storyline and I was wondering if you are going to finish it because you don't see very many Daniel is Xander's father stories
Review By [megan] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Netchka
Review:
Just read this again. Still love it. Can't wait for more chapters to come.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LuvinDrDj
Review:
This is great, I need more! :)
Review By [LuvinDrDj] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from jujukittychick
Review:
pretty good story so far, very unique with daniel being the missing dad. the girls freaking out is about typical too lol. course i think it's hilarious that each side is trying to research into the other hehe. very nice start, hope you get back around to working on this some mroe
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting plot ....
hope to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AXanFan
Review:
I usually like BtVS & SG-1 x-overs. I like the idea of Daniel being Xander's father. It seems like all we have gotten is 5 chapters of teasers.

Hallie said Xander can not return to Sunnydale and I hate that -- in my favorite stories he is still close to his girls and Giles.

I really hope you will continue this soon -- can't wait to see what Hallie is going to do for Xander -- Is he going to be younger? Hallie did say she was the demon for lost childhoods.

You have hinted at so much -- please update soon!!!
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)Saharra
Review:
Ohhhh. Now this is interesting. i'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)Saharra] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Ok, this has officially hit the point of being too contrived. This is some very hard author steering towards making sure Xander leaves Sunnydale and pulling some reason out of the sky about why he can't go back. You're also flirting with a bit of Willow-bashing. But Xander-specific stories are rather notorious for glorifying Xander to godlike levels and insisting that everyone else in BtVS totally sucks, so nothing new there. Next.

EDIT: You seem to be greatly mistaken about the purpose of reviews, on this site or any other. They are not merely repositories of mindless praise for the story of the author in question. Some may indeed be quite critical of the story and it is most explicitly the right of any reader on this site to express such views, as I have seen confirmed by the admins on more than one occasion here. If you can't handle the existence of any reviews that are not mindless praise of your writing efforts, that's your problem.
Comments from author:
First IN CANNON Willow and Buffy do shove Xander aside a lot and are 'worried' about him getting injured. But at the same time they want him around to serve as a contrast to their 'specialness'. As for glorifying Xander to god like levels, nope, not planning on that. But in canon he was a key figure and very important. He's the one who's mentioned in the First Evil prophecies. He's the one who broke or screwed up a lot of the prophecies, stood Angelus down, etc. If you've got complaints try making a PRIVATE REVIEW. If you don't like a fic that badly don't bother to review or read it.

No it's not pulling reasons out of thin air or such. Whatever.

Edit: For one who doesn't write, you certainly bitch up a storm. First off I don't mind CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. There's a difference between 'constructive' and 'ignorant ass' critique. But then who knows, maybe some just enjoy screwing with anything they don't like. After all, it's really simple. Don't like a fic, DON'T READ IT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
SWEET! Go Hallie!
Comments from author:
Thanks . I've got some more Hallie ideas planned for the next chapter as well, nothing concrete yet, just a few vague ideas that are stirring.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Elleria
Review:
So happy to see an update, and very muchly looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Glad to please, I've got the muses finally starting to stir and a few vague ideas appearing, nothing solid yet so it will probably be a while till the next update. But hopefully, *knocks on wood*, it'll be a much larger update.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this story, but a little frustrating that Xander still hasn't woke up.
Comments from author:
He'll be waking up sometime very soon, I've got one or two more chapters at the most before he wakes up and starts asking questions and things really go nuts for everyone.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay Giles was either stretching the truth or using misdirection if he said he knew Xander for his entire high school career. He only started at the school 3 years ago (high school is 4 years) when Buffy and friends were sophmores.
Comments from author:
a bit of a stretch, but I figure that Giles didn't just suddenly appear at Sunnydale High, as the Watcher's Council had people scattered all over the world. So would he have been there before Buffy arrived? It's been so long since I watched the first season I can't completely recall. But it's also a tiny bit of artistic license.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Genuka
Review:
That was a truly evil cliffy! I'd like to see Xander finally wake up and start dealing with his new 'dads'! More Please!!!

I just know that Buffy and Willow are gonna try and force Xander to come back to Sunnyhell and not just plain be happy for him being in a better if slightly strange sitch.
Comments from author:
*sighs and blushes* I know it was a very evil cliffy, but the muses just didn't want to go any further no matter what I tried. So I posted what little I had in hopes they might perk up a little. I'm figuring maybe a chapter or two more before Xander wakes up, gotta deal with the Scoobies yet, *smirks* Can't quite figure out yet how that's going to happen, but I expect that Hallie and Anya reading the two idiots the riot act in front of Giles will probably be a part of it. Plus have to have a Jack/Daniel scene yet especially with the cliffie that this was....*giggles* Jack is not going to be very happy, I expect. Hmmmm will Sam's brain explode from learning about demons and magic and the rest? *cackles* Yep, it's an evil thought..... hmmmm gotta think about a few other peoples reactions as well Come on muses, time to get back on track lol
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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