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Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Ah, C'mon! You get me interested and make a statement like "Next. The Cabbit Sisters!?" and then leave me high and dry!?! Dirty pool, guvnah!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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A very interesting blend of stories. Nicely crafted and enjoyable. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from Dragonwolftiger
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Great story. Why not have a new planet with marvel characters? Like Dr. Doom, Iron Man or Iron Magus, Captain America, Spiderman, & Wolverine. Please continue and update as able.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from eriktheviking
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Great writing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from superbrutal
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I've been looking forward to this next chapter for awhile now, and I'm very glad that you decided to continue.

I couldn't find the Tenchi Muyo! Ryo Ohki episodes anywhere, and your fic made me want to watch them again so much that I went out and bought that season.

I really like your fic, and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Youtube has Tenchi Muyo, GXP, and Dual. There are also others if you can put up with megavideo. I would buy them too if I could find them! Hope your enjoying them.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from ReflectionsOfReality
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How about introducing an alternate reality Cybertron from the Transformers series? Maybe one where the meeting between Megatron and the Fallen resulted in them killing each other so there was never any war and Cybertron was perfectly happy with its own planet and a handful of colonies? In other words, all characters exist but there was no conflict.

If you want a little Comic book then why not have them come across the remain of Galacticus or one of the other planet eaters?

Another thought would be an alternate Borg Collective from Star Trek. Instead of making them villains make them helpful?

Or another brilliant inversion have Daniel come across the Unas/Goa'uld home world only to discover that the race went in a different direction and followed true sybiosis?

What would happen if the Nox were militant? Scary thought right?

OH! What about a Green Lantern Corps that was just a religious sect? Or a Jedi order that believes in non-interference and complete isolationisim? Or a Sith corporation that deal with ecological recovery (after all many races would have made it to the stars as only a last resort after messing up their own worlds)...

Another geek possibility would be for them to discover the Ferengi (Star Trek) only for one of the three from other realities to have been a trekie and know how bad unleashing them on the rest of the universe.

Another thought would be for Daniel to discover the remains of an Asgardian civilization. Maybe a natural disaster before they started cloning themselves that would leave behind a lot of perfectly preserved original Asgard corpses with genetic material?

There are so many possibilities,
~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode 1 - Academy Days" from AnimeRonin
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You still need to work on your tense problems, they seem to go back and forth.
Comments from author:
I doubt I'm ever going to improve. If my Beta-Reader doesn't find them, they aren't getting found and he's a Good Beta. Story Ideas are welcome, but grammar is not important to me.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluesnowman
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Awesome story so far keep it up.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from superbrutal
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I enjoyed this story very much, makes me want to go back an re-watch the ole Tenchi Muyo show.

Great job.
Comments from author:
It's a great series. I love Tenchi Ryo-ohki (OAV series 1-3) and Tenchi GXP. The Tenchi Solution is the name given to how to solve a Harem problem, they marry all the girls including in time the cabbits. Canon fact. Imagine what will happen to Shinji, Daniel, and Xander given there history with women.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AnimeRonin
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Not bad; you need to work on the tense selection. That looked to be a derivative of Third Person Omniscient and it waffled here and there. Make sure you're using the right tense when you do action - hit instead of hits and such. Keep it up.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nerdgirl
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It's hard to want to read this with the summary so misspelled. Some corrections- 'Daniel' not ' Danial,' and 'police' not 'polace'
Review By [Nerdgirl] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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I'm not familiar with the anime crossovers but this story is very well written and definitely kept my interest and left me wanting more. Well done & thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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