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Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This amused me :) Nice!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from Blackett
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nice
Review By [Blackett] • Date [19 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from CousinMary
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This is a nice start. I'd love to read more :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from MountainKing
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This is a good idea, a little too good to be a one shot.
Thing is if you do expand it you might want to slow things down, in a manner of speaking. Part of the point of Smallville is Clark adjusting to his powers. While the introduction of Supergirl (Kara) showed Kryptonian females develop powers quicker they don't have the fine control males do. An interesting twist, but if you think about how passionate young women can be with mood swings not unsurprising (sorry if that sounds insulting).
In other words Dawn might be able to fly but stopping is a problem. You've already touched on this with her suddenly finding herself in New York but there's the whole catalogue before that you just sped through. Heat vision for example would be the coolest thing in the world until she almost hurts someone (probably Giles knowing his luck).
Like I said this is too good to be a one shot, it's sparking off so many ideas. I do hope to read more

Mountain King
Comments from author:
I'm planning for this to be the beginning of a series. In fact, I already have it set up that way. I'm trying to go back and see what's going on in some of the later episodes of Smallville first though. Last year I had Lit class during them and I respect the show too much to just half-do it.

Either way, I'm trying to go back and the rest of the story should be slowed down quite a bit. In retrospect, I should've made it a two shot, but you know what they say about hindsight. Thank you for your input. It'll be helpful, and if it's sparking ideas go right ahead. I don't worry too much about ideas on these things. I was just trying to find something that wasn't done to death and thought this could be fun.

Hey, and I take no offense. Partially because at times I resemble that, girls are naturally emotional, comes with the package.

Denae
Review By [MountainKing] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from EllandrahSylver
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Sooo.... I'm going to wait and see how you write the bit where it gets sprung on Clark that he's a father, mystically speaking. *smirks*

Because obviously, Buffy and Clark are Dawn's parents.

Interesting plot bunny.

*looks down*

...

Nice plot bunny.

*backs away*

Stay.

...

*runs*


(edit: Actually, I was running away from the bunny, because this got me ruminating on another fic, and I've already got too many quasi-abandoned WIPs.)
Comments from author:
You don't have to run, in fact I'm kind of liking the idea of this, and plan to continue with it although it will probably take a while. Glad you like the idea, and hope you will read more when it comes.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from londeaux
Review:
Please continue this story. This is really good so far.
Comments from author:
Thank you! It may take a bit, but I definitely plan to do so.
Review By [londeaux] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from draconis
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Does hulu.com carry Smallville episodes? But, what you really need to find is a synopsis of the series to date, or synopses of each year of the series...cause how they got from point in time when Clark developed all his powers to the current season (full of intrigue, misc soap-opera-esque relationships and monsters, Lana and Chloe having special powers, corporate espionage, etc) is frankly confusing to the neophyte.

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from earlier author's response...
"I was planning on trying youtube and some other places to brush up on Smallville a bit. Hope you continue to like it."
Comments from author:
I don't know, but it's definitely a good one to try, and the synopsis thing is a really good idea. I saw all of it, up until the whole thing with Lana being possessed or something and with Jason (I think he was the same guy that plays Dean on Supernatural if I remember correctly), and then an episode here and there.

Thank you so much for your help though.
Review By [draconis] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from draconis
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Intriguing concept. Would be real hell on demons, even though Kryptonians are supposedly susceptible to magicks.

Now, if only a "House of Jor-el" symbol appeared somewhere, or the "Key" found a Kryptonian "key" or crystal...like the ones in Smallville.
Comments from author:
I'm going to work on the specifics of that kind of stuff, before I do it. I made this a ficlet, so that I could use mainly the Buffy characters that I'm more familiar with writing. I always loved Smallville, even though the last two years I have had class when the show came on and no DVR to help me keep up with it.
Review By [draconis] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Lemons and Demons" from LallaBelle
Review:
Wow. Great start. And this from someone who definitely isn't versed in Smallville, except for what I've found out on the net. Still I think you've got the characterisations of the Scoobies down pat. I think you'll do a great job if it turns into a series!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm definitely blushing now. I was planning on trying youtube and some other places to brush up on Smallville a bit. Hope you continue to like it.
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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