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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
You are really frustrating me with these one shots. I love this and really wish this was part of a series.
Review By [twlight] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this is good, i hope you continue it one day
Review By [loretta] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW
Review:
This is hilarious! Do you have any more stories/chapters that expand on this idea? Thanks for sharing!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
Review:
OOHH! So follow up worthy! I wish that you would do a follow-up, but i know, I read that you will do it only if inspiration hits... But MAN! Dawn and Draco...funny!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winnie
Review:
oh, this story leaves it wide open to a sequel
would like to see same
good story, well written
Review By [winnie] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from caissana
Review:
please, please, please expande it!!! I know it breaks the rules of the challenge, but both Dawn and Malfoy are rule breakers!!
Review By [caissana] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
uahhh Dawn must habe been really drunk *g*
Comments from author:
Oh, she was! :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from organicmagic
Review:
I do hope you have the inspiration to expand this as it is a well-written set of two so far and I like the concept.
Review By [organicmagic] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from namegoeshere
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I would love to see another ficlet or two! But as it is I loved the two you have written. I love the self writing family tree thing.
Review By [namegoeshere] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xeelia
Review:
This is a great ficlet! Love Draco's reaction! :) hehehe Draco having to deal with Buffy, the Scoobies, and most of all Spike would be great! I hope your muse keeps this series going!! Great work!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
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I'm REALLY looking forward to seeing Draco meet his prospective in-laws. If he's lucky enough and Dawn's persuasive enough, he might even survive the occasion. ;-)
Comments from author:
You assume Dawn wants him to survive the occasion... ;)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
You have to make this chapter into a prolouge, and turn this into a longer story! The premise is just too good to let it go as a one shot! Dawn is a supernatural being who may qualify as a witch, but she is certainly not a wand witch like those of the Wizarding World. Even if the Malfoys survived Voldemort, and have learned NOT to say mudblood, the are still purebloods with a superiority complex. The Malfoys vs. the Scoobies would be quite a 'cage match'. Dawn is strong willed, she is intelligent, and she is a fighter. If she's having Draco Malfoy's baby, he would have to work hard to prove himself worthy to be her baby's father, rather than just be a sperm donor like Hank Summers. I'll be keeping an eye on the latest list, just in case you decide to expand this into a story. Please! It could be so good!
Comments from author:
This is actually a follow on to "Worse Than A Hangover", so if anything was going to turn into prologue, that would be it. There might be more later, there might not. (I'm not trying to be coy, just honest. If inspiration strikes, it will happen. If not, I won't force it.) I don't know that any followups will work into a coherent story with an overall plot, though. I suspect it would probably be more like a series of ficlets.
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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