I really enjoyed this beginning of a story. Is it too late to hope for more? If this is all we get I'll just say it was sad but lovely. It really promised to be an interesting and fun read. So thanks for that much, but please write more :)
Oh my gosh I really love this. Wesley is Harry, oh boy oh boy oh boy, this has so much potential and his going to sunnydale during the whole first thing. Shucks what will Willow think and oh I have too many things going through my head right now. Lovely start and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I wasn't sure this setup would work, but you've done a good job of it so far. The only thing that really doesn't fit is that Wesley appears about a decade older than Harry would be, and his hair is *not* Harry-wild; you handwaved the eye color and the scar successfully, but not the other appearance changes.
I'll be tracking this to see what comes next. I *like* the idea of him going to Sunnydale to help Buffy; I want to see where that goes.
Comments from author:
The rest of his changes have explanations, don't worry. I just didn't want to do too much of that at once.
Review By [jedibuttercup] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
christytrekkie
