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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from purrfus
Intriguing. I've set tracking to make sure I don't miss the updates.

How far after DH is this set? How old is Draco? I know its convention for the master or dom in a m/m relationship to refer to the slave or sub as boy, but it made me wonder.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
The lineage and family stuff is the most interesting part of the story for me.
Comments from author:
I got inspired and decided to do a twist on a fic that had Riley as being the grandson of McGonnagal, and the son of Graham hardly got to be seen that mcuh on the this is the result.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from junnights
intriguing I think. :) hehe - kinda promising and all. Never considered the pairing:) Would like to see more:)

Comments from author:
I'm leaning towards more, but at the moment the muses and bunny are being very quiet...usually that's a very bad sign. Either they are bored or they're plotting something truly evil. *shiver* I have the feeling that it's the latter. Then again real life has been crappy of late, so I've been doing more 'darker' fic than not.
Review By [junnights] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
When I read South America, I figured that it would be Riley or Graham. I guess we know whose side Draco was on during the war. His own! All that matters to him is what HE wants. Graham would have been used to following orders as a soldier. There is a difference between choosing to join the services, and being forced into servitude. Draco is not a nice guy.
Comments from author:
Since when was Draco a nice guy? *snickers* Now for the moment my only question is to keep this fic going or not *sighs* so many fics, so little time
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RoseGoddess
Very interesting and unique. Are you going to add anything to this? Because I think Draco's more needy and insecure than he lets on (especially since he uses a potion but leave Graham his personality and thoughts).

Also, maybe a 'slash' warning, just to deter those who would really object - or did you want to shock them?
Comments from author:
Well it is labeled slash, and nothing has happened if I do continue it, I will make sure to make that much clearer. Right now, I'm debating on keeping it going or leaving it as is.
Review By [RoseGoddess] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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