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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Paradox
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*sighs* I need to pick up the Nightside novels, don't I?

This sounds fascinating! I'm looking forward to finding out more about Sam and Riley and the Loathly Ones(?)

Also Whoo! Ianto with a torc and an out that may not require Retcon or death. This pleases me.
Review By [Paradox] • Date [23 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Looks like Jack's information on Suzie is a bit outdated... and the Finns have jumped to a reasonable yet extremely unlikely conclusion. Russia, eh? Cool. Too bad they're stopping over in London, the longer they stay in easy range of Torchwood, the more complicated things are likely to get.

I'm missing out on some of the mythology here. I appreciate Ianto's thoughts on his interactions with the Droods and hopeful that the remaining blanks will be filled in later in the story :)
Comments from author:
Yep. Jack is many things but he's never shown to be very thorough. The last time he was in Nightside was during John's attempt to make it in the mundane world. The Finns' viewpoint is rather limited and they've jumped to a couple faulty conclusions. :)

I'm trying to balance mythology here. I'm glad Ianto's thought monologue helped I was worried I was overexplaining. I'll continue to fill in bits and pieces where it's necessary to keep the story coherent. The Secret Histories I'm pretty sure are meant to be in the same world as the Nightside novels. They're worth reading if you get the chance and if you haven't read Amber by Roger Zelazny you need to. They are absolutely wonderful.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Paradox
Review:
This is a fantastic story. I love the way you've blended all the universes together and how it all seems to work seamlessly.

That's really the mark of an excellent crossover.
Comments from author:
Thank you and thank you for your help beta-ing.
Review By [Paradox] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Excellent cards, good prophesy... Hmm, I'm not sure I've seen an episode with the girl, but definitely a great use.

So, Ethan can't use the gun? Or vice versa? Cool.


Well, it's a good story. I don't know why it isn't getting more hits... How about rewriting the summary (maybe by including the Initiative, or whomever the armed group introduced in this chapter is) and clicking the 'action' tag?
Comments from author:
Thanks. She was in Dead Man Walking and Fragments.

More with the vice versa. :)

Oh good suggestion. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Awesome - Ethan's been researched on :D
Comments from author:
Well, if you're the Initiative or Torchwood then what else is he good for? :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [1 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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... Oh, great. Just what the universe needs.


Cool idea :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. It was begging to be written. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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