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Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven

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Review of chapter "The neighbourhood (part 1)" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Done, and yet I do not know where it was ever going...
Comments from author:
Honestly, it was just about the adventures of Xander and Harmony in Africa; they were/are going nowhere in particular, and that's why this series is on a hiatus for the moment.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The cheetah (part 1)" from sistercity
Review:
If this is part 1, why is it complete?
Comments from author:
No, it's not. I'm going to write a sequel to it soon.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The cheetah (part 1)" from VampireCow
Review:
...and the saga continues! *squee* Whoever could this werecheetah be?
Comments from author:
An OC?
Review By [VampireCow] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elephants" from VampireCow
Review:
I don't know why, but this fic greatly amused me.
Review By [VampireCow] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elephants" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Only those two, I swear...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elephants" from CPTSkip
Review:
OK, on a oddness scale of 1 to 10, your story hits a 99.7327. But I still liked it. As I wrote afte the first episode, it is like one of those old Disney Nature Specials, but if Uncle Walt had been heavy into the mescalin. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life in the Mala-Mala" from Rune
Review:
Xander and a real female hyena? While I know he will never land a normal girl I also know he can do better. Please don't let them have cubs!
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from draconis
Review:
Interesting cross-over. I think it's unique.

Harmony was very lucky while in the water she didn't have to deal with any crocodiles!

I'm imagining the next cross-over...involving Steve Irwin documenting demons of the Outback.

I can hear him now. "Crikey! Isn't she a beauuuutiful Xplarnaak demon? Whooo! She's a bit feisty."
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!.. and no, I dunno if I'll be involving Steve Irwin next any time soon.
Review By [draconis] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from eriktheviking
Review:
Some people just can't catch a break. Great writing, thanks.
Comments from author:
You're welcome - and thanks for the rating and review!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your very odd story. It felt sort of like one of the old Disney Nature Specials, with a vampire added of course. I hope there will be more as I'd sort of like to see what further strange things happen to Harm and Xander. Lol!

Edit: There is still one instance you have written "Harmony Jones".
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind review. I do try, but I'm not sure where I'll be going with this yet.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome. Nice wildlife :)

Saber-toothed armadillo cat? Sweet.

You can probably disable the hyphens by messing around with Word's preferences. Please do so, unless you need them for your unposted projects.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I tried. The armadillo cat was based on one of Africa's cryptid monsters, the dingonek.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from xon
Review:
Well... it's different, I'll give you that.

I just can't see Xander ever voluntarily traveling anywhere with Harmony.
Comments from author:
He wasn't - Harm just snuck into his car by mistake, when he wasn't looking and just tagged along - involuntarility.
Review By [xon] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from xon
Review:
First off, Harmony's last name is Kendall.

Second, what's with the hyphens? Did you write this elsewhere and do a copy-paste?
Comments from author:
Okay, I fixed Harmony's last name; also, sorry about the hyphens - yeah, I tend to copy and paste from Microsoft Word. What did you think of story besides those details?
Review By [xon] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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