Review of chapter "The neighbourhood (part 1)" from nerfherder
Review:
Done, and yet I do not know where it was ever going...
Comments from author:
Honestly, it was just about the adventures of Xander and Harmony in Africa; they were/are going nowhere in particular, and that's why this series is on a hiatus for the moment.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The cheetah (part 1)" from sistercity
Review:
If this is part 1, why is it complete?
Comments from author:
No, it's not. I'm going to write a sequel to it soon.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The cheetah (part 1)" from VampireCow
Review:
...and the saga continues! *squee* Whoever could this werecheetah be?
Comments from author:
An OC?
Review By [VampireCow] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
OK, on a oddness scale of 1 to 10, your story hits a 99.7327. But I still liked it. As I wrote afte the first episode, it is like one of those old Disney Nature Specials, but if Uncle Walt had been heavy into the mescalin. Lol!
Review of chapter "Life in the Mala-Mala" from Rune
Review:
Xander and a real female hyena? While I know he will never land a normal girl I also know he can do better. Please don't let them have cubs!
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from draconis
Review:
Interesting cross-over. I think it's unique.
Harmony was very lucky while in the water she didn't have to deal with any crocodiles!
I'm imagining the next cross-over...involving Steve Irwin documenting demons of the Outback.
I can hear him now. "Crikey! Isn't she a beauuuutiful Xplarnaak demon? Whooo! She's a bit feisty."
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!.. and no, I dunno if I'll be involving Steve Irwin next any time soon.
Review By [draconis] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from eriktheviking
Review:
Some people just can't catch a break. Great writing, thanks.
Comments from author:
You're welcome - and thanks for the rating and review!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your very odd story. It felt sort of like one of the old Disney Nature Specials, with a vampire added of course. I hope there will be more as I'd sort of like to see what further strange things happen to Harm and Xander. Lol!
Edit: There is still one instance you have written "Harmony Jones".
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind review. I do try, but I'm not sure where I'll be going with this yet.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from Shieldage
Review:
Awesome. Nice wildlife :)
Saber-toothed armadillo cat? Sweet.
You can probably disable the hyphens by messing around with Word's preferences. Please do so, unless you need them for your unposted projects.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I tried. The armadillo cat was based on one of Africa's cryptid monsters, the dingonek.
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from xon
Review:
Well... it's different, I'll give you that.
I just can't see Xander ever voluntarily traveling anywhere with Harmony.
Comments from author:
He wasn't - Harm just snuck into his car by mistake, when he wasn't looking and just tagged along - involuntarility.
Review of chapter "Xander (and Harmony) and Africa's Super Seven" from xon
Review:
First off, Harmony's last name is Kendall.
Second, what's with the hyphens? Did you write this elsewhere and do a copy-paste?
Comments from author:
Okay, I fixed Harmony's last name; also, sorry about the hyphens - yeah, I tend to copy and paste from Microsoft Word. What did you think of story besides those details?
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