Review of chapter "Chapter One" from naplam
This, as well as the other two chapters, is the best Doctor Who crossover here.
Review By [naplam
] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChloeBlack
Review By [ChloeBlack
] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
ACE! You got the First Doctor down PERFECTLY! And seeing Tara's reaction to him was outstanding. As you know, I AM a fan of the Doctor, and am loving the idea of this idea of the Doctor visiting the Hellmouth.
Review By [Harry
] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
In general an interesting little bit of work with a VERY effective portrayal of the First Doctor, but just one flaw; the chameleon circuit only broke down after the Doctor left Foreman's Yard with Ian and Barbara, so if he's just with Susan at this point the TARDIS should still be able to become anything it has to in order to blend in.
That aside, nice bit of work; any chance of a sequel?
Comments from author:
Ahh well I never explicitly stated it was a police box. Merely that it was blue and had a light on top. I deliberately dodged this problem with a few select omissions:- at no point did Tara see writing or windows on the TARDIS.
I know it looks like a cop out, but I was careful with it at the time.
Originally there wasn't going to be a sequel, but a review here sparked something off. I'm working on it now; it features the Seventh Doctor, Ace and Tara. I hope to make Tara's fate resonate more within the overall Buffy timeline.
In other words she's still going to die from the impossible bullet, but there's more to it than random chance. There has to be, seriously how did that bullet brake a window pane on the second floor, at chest height no less, if it was shot from ground level? Someone had to be playing games with physics.
Thanks for the review, it is fantastic to hear from a fellow fanfic author I respect hugely.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
Wonderful. I've never seen an Xover with 1 and Susan before.
This deserves a sequel... I think The Doctor would be very curious about a girl that could 'see' that much. Maybe he checks in on Tara again. But, which one?
Comments from author:
If I did follow up on this one it would have to be with the Seventh Doctor. I think he's one of the best and one of the most underused of the lot.
I just don't have a plot, yet. You see the "sad smile" the first doctor gave Tara was because he had caught a glimpse into her future and fate. The Doctor checking up on Tara wouldn't really be necessary.
On the other hand just as Dawn needed someone to help maybe our friend with an umbrella "Just happens" to bump into Tara at a coffee shop and strike up a conversation...
Excuse me, I think a few random plot threads I've been toying with for a while just came up in a nice little bow
Thanks for the Review
Review By [Scrappychic
] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Emeraldfire
You described the first doctor perfectly! I really enjoyed your fic.
Review By [Emeraldfire
] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]