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Review of chapter "The End" from Oxnate
Review:
Well, your writing in this series has gone from OK to near perfection, I'm impressed.
Comments from author:
Glad to know its visibly improved. I spend a lot more time editing and revising before posting, and I've tried to emulate the styles of some of my favorite authors as I still have the problem with the telling vs showing style of writing,a nd I think thats helped alot.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [13 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Whut the.....!!!!!...... Dude! There better be an ending!
Comments from author:
Yup, theres an ending.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from Fayari
Review:
When's the next story?
Comments from author:
Next story is now. Ironic, you reviewed when I was finally figuring out where I would take the story and finishing wriyting the intro.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
uhh that was a short end, but I look forward to see what u will do next.
Comments from author:
Rewrote that section and added more in the new story, check it out.

And thank you for all the reviews.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from AnFan
Review:
Wow... creative story, but I really didn't like the ending. Though, I suppose I can't blame you too much given the trend of the comics you've based part of your story on. Still. Crappy ending for Xander and Jenny.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Good news for you, rewrote ending in the new story. Check it out.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ohhaaa what a fight, can't wait to read the end.
Comments from author:
Next part of the series is up, even if about half is recap/rewrite.

Hope you enjoy.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from Markelo
Review:
Nice. Xander's in the Marvel Universe.
Comments from author:
Not quite.

Part of next story is up now.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from Selias
Review:
Finished reading the series again. Can't say that I like the most recent installment all that much, because of the annoying arrogant superheroes, but since it's going to be crossed with Bleach next, I can't really complain, because bleach is pretty fricken awesome. Can't wait to see what happens next. What happened to the Sword of Aeons, anyway? Can you retcon it so the sword goes back to Xander if either he or Jenny go a week without touching it or he summons it or something?
Comments from author:
Yeah, I did make the superheroes rather arrogant in this story didnt I
Thats just the way I see them sometimes, and that view just seemed to fit for this story as I can't seemt hem happy with a pair of super powered mercanaries walking around.

And yes, Bleach is awesome. I got books 32 and 33 for christmas, then someone told me about manga fox and I ended up finishing the whole aizen arc.

And the Sword will pop up again in Jenny's story.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Selias] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from DarthPayne
Review:
Hey, will this series be continued now that Fable III is out?

Edit: Just had a thought while playing Fable III. If Xander dislikes the Halo, what would he think if he suddenly started sprouting Wings instead on occasion?
Comments from author:
Yes it will continue, however, Fable 3 will not be part of it.

Honestly, I thought Fable was the best game, and number 2 wasnt worth the $60 on the release date, so I certainly wont be getting Fable 3 until it drops way down in price, so it wont be making an appearance. Fable 2 will though.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from KingDarius
Review:
good story so far, i hope you post the next story in the series soon, though im not too enthusiastic about the bleach crossover. bleach came out after i more or less stopped watching anime. inyuasha was tolerable,. and i liked yu yu hakusho at the time though i doubt it would be as appealing now a days. basically the only anime i will still watch occasionally anymore are the gundam shows, cowboy bebop, and full metal alchemist. oh, and i thought the general consensus was that gotham was in Jersey? anyway, hope you post the next story in the series soon, sorry about going on about the rant about anime, lol.
Comments from author:
I'll post it when I can. College has been eating my time.

I have personally never watched the anime, I find myself disliking anime in general because they stretch stuff out way to far, like making quick flashbacks last an entire episode. However, I love the Bleach manga, which is what the story will be using.

don't know what the Jerey/Gotham part is refering to, its ben awhile since I reread the story.

Thanks for the review
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from Rune
Review:
Story and Series Review.

Its good, very good, but you seem to have killed Xander and jailed Jenny so they(and I) can't be happy.

Then Xander seems like he might be alive but really separated from Jenny, also not good but better than dead.

Get them together again please and then kick evils butt, HARD!

After that you can kill them if you want but do it so they go out together, perhaps while kicking some "good" butt.
You know the kind of "good" that lets rapists and worse live and be repeat offenders.

After that if you want you can start a series that has Xander and Jenny as Eternal Champions doing the "dirty work" that "good" just cannot seem to do.

Thanks for killing the Joker and Lex.
Comments from author:
don't worry, this isnt the end. I have more planned, but college and League of Legends seem to have eaten my time.

Thanks for the review
Review By [Rune] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from Ansku
Review:
Fascinating :)
Comments from author:
Sorry for the slow reply and thank you for the review.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from SonofthePearl
Review:
Did Xander and Jenny just get a mega boost in power? ROFL. Ooh the League is gonna get it now. . . .
Comments from author:
Maybe....
Thanks for the review.
Review By [SonofthePearl] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from SCIfilover
Review:
It is going to be rather hard for the authorities to find a jury to judge Jenny impartially as she and her husband killed the Joker, Darkseid, Luther and others.Also, Jenny saved the world which cost her husband's life.

What i meant by combining magics is that most buffyverse magic is based on calling on gods for aid, minor reality warping, curses and playing with souls. Whereas, Will magic is more based on combat as well as potions and having bags bigger on the inside. Also, normal magic can corrupt you as their are different types to it such as earth, light and dark magic to become addicts, mad or become evil, unlike will magic which is internal energy, it can't corrupt you to be evil you have to be evil by choice.
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Or is it?" from sunamee
Review:
I look forward to the next story. Looks like a crossover with Bleach.
Comments from author:
Sorry for the slow reply, was at a Habitat for Humanity site for a week.

Good guess.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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