Whut the.....!!!!!...... Dude! There better be an ending!

Yup, theres an ending.

Thanks for the review.

When's the next story?

Next story is now. Ironic, you reviewed when I was finally figuring out where I would take the story and finishing wriyting the intro.

uhh that was a short end, but I look forward to see what u will do next.

Rewrote that section and added more in the new story, check it out.

And thank you for all the reviews.

Wow... creative story, but I really didn't like the ending. Though, I suppose I can't blame you too much given the trend of the comics you've based part of your story on. Still. Crappy ending for Xander and Jenny.

Thank you.

Good news for you, rewrote ending in the new story. Check it out.

ohhaaa what a fight, can't wait to read the end.

Next part of the series is up, even if about half is recap/rewrite.

Hope you enjoy.

Nice. Xander's in the Marvel Universe.

Not quite.

Part of next story is up now.

Finished reading the series again. Can't say that I like the most recent installment all that much, because of the annoying arrogant superheroes, but since it's going to be crossed with Bleach next, I can't really complain, because bleach is pretty fricken awesome. Can't wait to see what happens next. What happened to the Sword of Aeons, anyway? Can you retcon it so the sword goes back to Xander if either he or Jenny go a week without touching it or he summons it or something?

Yeah, I did make the superheroes rather arrogant in this story didnt I
Thats just the way I see them sometimes, and that view just seemed to fit for this story as I can't seemt hem happy with a pair of super powered mercanaries walking around.

And yes, Bleach is awesome. I got books 32 and 33 for christmas, then someone told me about manga fox and I ended up finishing the whole aizen arc.

And the Sword will pop up again in Jenny's story.

Thanks for the review.

Hey, will this series be continued now that Fable III is out?

Edit: Just had a thought while playing Fable III. If Xander dislikes the Halo, what would he think if he suddenly started sprouting Wings instead on occasion?

Yes it will continue, however, Fable 3 will not be part of it.

Honestly, I thought Fable was the best game, and number 2 wasnt worth the $60 on the release date, so I certainly wont be getting Fable 3 until it drops way down in price, so it wont be making an appearance. Fable 2 will though.

good story so far, i hope you post the next story in the series soon, though im not too enthusiastic about the bleach crossover. bleach came out after i more or less stopped watching anime. inyuasha was tolerable,. and i liked yu yu hakusho at the time though i doubt it would be as appealing now a days. basically the only anime i will still watch occasionally anymore are the gundam shows, cowboy bebop, and full metal alchemist. oh, and i thought the general consensus was that gotham was in Jersey? anyway, hope you post the next story in the series soon, sorry about going on about the rant about anime, lol.

I'll post it when I can. College has been eating my time.

I have personally never watched the anime, I find myself disliking anime in general because they stretch stuff out way to far, like making quick flashbacks last an entire episode. However, I love the Bleach manga, which is what the story will be using.

don't know what the Jerey/Gotham part is refering to, its ben awhile since I reread the story.

Thanks for the review

Story and Series Review.

Its good, very good, but you seem to have killed Xander and jailed Jenny so they(and I) can't be happy.

Then Xander seems like he might be alive but really separated from Jenny, also not good but better than dead.

Get them together again please and then kick evils butt, HARD!

After that you can kill them if you want but do it so they go out together, perhaps while kicking some "good" butt.
You know the kind of "good" that lets rapists and worse live and be repeat offenders.

After that if you want you can start a series that has Xander and Jenny as Eternal Champions doing the "dirty work" that "good" just cannot seem to do.

Thanks for killing the Joker and Lex.

don't worry, this isnt the end. I have more planned, but college and League of Legends seem to have eaten my time.

Thanks for the review

Fascinating :)

Sorry for the slow reply and thank you for the review.

Did Xander and Jenny just get a mega boost in power? ROFL. Ooh the League is gonna get it now. . . .

Maybe....
Thanks for the review.

It is going to be rather hard for the authorities to find a jury to judge Jenny impartially as she and her husband killed the Joker, Darkseid, Luther and others.Also, Jenny saved the world which cost her husband's life.

What i meant by combining magics is that most buffyverse magic is based on calling on gods for aid, minor reality warping, curses and playing with souls. Whereas, Will magic is more based on combat as well as potions and having bags bigger on the inside. Also, normal magic can corrupt you as their are different types to it such as earth, light and dark magic to become addicts, mad or become evil, unlike will magic which is internal energy, it can't corrupt you to be evil you have to be evil by choice.

I look forward to the next story. Looks like a crossover with Bleach.

Sorry for the slow reply, was at a Habitat for Humanity site for a week.

Good guess.

Thanks for the review.

Oh man, i loved this series.

Will Xander and Jenny be going to Albion in the future?

I'd love to see them get their hands on some of the weapons in Fable 2(especially the Katana).

Heck, from Albion they can even find a way to the Halo Universe as seen by the rifle you can get on Knothole Island. (Xander and Jenny Vs Covenant/Gravemind? Coolio.)

I have both games so i know how good they are, am eagerly awaiting Fable III.

Sorry for the slow reply, was at a Habitat for Humanity site for a week.

Thank you, always nice to have fans.

Yes, at least one of them.

Meh, Jenny has the Sword of Aeons which is better then any weapon in Fable 2. Now, finding another weapon lost to the ages from Fable 1, thats a possibility.

Lol, I always found that gun funny. Don't really see that crossover now, to much interferance in the Halo plot, and honestly, they'd be completely outmatched, what with ships and all.

I for one was rather disappointed in Fable 2 and suspect I won't be buying Fable 3 until I can get it dirt cheap. Fable 2 just wasn't as fun as the first one. I disliked both the money system and the magic system, which were two of my favorite things from the first one and what made me love i so much, I adored those spell combinations. And honestly, what adventurer chops wood for a living? Adventuers are supposed to make money, after all, whats the point in killing the troll for free?

Thanks for the review.