Review of chapter "Attraction" from LeaFairy
I just found this, and OMG this is the end of "A Sense of Inevitability"?! What?! How depressing, I just adored that story and was really looking forward to seeing what would happen next with Dawn and Derek and of course finding out more about the connection between Andrew and Cameron, my guess was that he's the one, or one of the people that re-programmed her...
Anyways, this was still good even though it's possibility the end, I really did love reading from Derek's POV about his and Dawn's first real meeting in the jail. Great job! Anyhoo, I do hope this isn't the end, but even if it is, I truly loved reading this. Thanks for sharing!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attraction" from christytrekkie
Ahhh, come on thats not the end of that is it? So much potential for a story here, and the pairing would be hot to say the least. Oh well.
Review By [christytrekkie
] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]