Geez Gunn. Just smile hug and accept. Dork. I loved how Bella just went all grr on the demon and whined like a little kid whose toy got taken when Angel killed it. That was cute. I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
FRED! He imprinted on Fred! That's awesome! Go Fred getting the hunky shapeshifter. WOOT! And I love how Bella told off Edward. LOL That was classic and beautiful I think I almost teared at that. So proud. LOL I'm sad it's almost over but I'll enjoy it to the end.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
I love this story so much! Spike/Bella is a really rare couple so I'm glad your doing this. How big of a problem are you goinng to make Edward? I'm hoping that the demon inside of Bella will hate him, just because it will be very interesting.
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! The Cullens! I knew they would show up with Jacob! I KNEW it! *happy dance* I win! LOL But omg I thought I would die without the update. So happy! T.T So very happy! Anyway awesome. So Bella's a demon now. Cool! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that the update made you so happy. lol. Originally I was going to have the Cullens show up after Jake, but I'm wanted to wrap this story up...so I had them come with Jake.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
How dare you end it there? You must continue as soon as possible. Today in fact. Please? This is such a fun story. I love the colors: black, blue, and purple. I can't wait to see how the Cullen's react to her demon. Will you keep her demon, or will you have Wesley find a way to get it out of her? 'Cause I vote for keeping the demon. It's a cool, new twist that makes Bella an equal to the demons.
Very cool. Do you have an idea of a name for the demon inside Bella? Will Bella and the demon be separate? Like two entities living in one body, or will they become one person? Oh, also, what do the tattoos look like and where exactly are they? Do they go all the way down her leg? Where do they stop basically?
Comments from author:
Unless I suddenly have a great change of heart, I will be leaving Bella with the demon. I think that after all Bella has been through she needs a little extra somethin'. Thanks so much for the review!
I missed the end of your review, and for some reason didn't even see the other questions! So here are my answers. Bella will name her demon. They will be separate. The tattoos are basicly black lines, though it's hard to explain in writting what they look like. They do go all the way down her leg, the last of them stops on her big toe. Hope this answered all of your questions!
Review By [legarde] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Not Rated
How could you!!! what an evil cliffie!!! urgh.... definitely not expecting the demon twist, that was really cool.... I can't wait for the next chapter!
good story!! I love the bella and spike. One thing you messed up one was when bella got her hair colored and she was looking at herself in a widow then she saw herself and Spike. Spike doesn't have a reflection, so she wouldn't be able to see him.
Comments from author:
Damn! Well thanks so much for telling me...now I'm mad at myself.
Review By [yuiop] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It my be the speed at which I read (my family complains that I cannot possibly understand a 500 page book that I read in 10 hours) but I am still a little shaky as to where in the Twilight time line this story fits. I get that it starts after Bella jumped off of the cliff, but that is about it... I have no feel for how much time has past.
Other than that issue, I like the way that you have AU'd this story. I often have problems with stories based on this world because the tone of the originals is a little hard to catch, but you've done well so far. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
This may upset some people, but with this fic...well, I'm pretty much throwing out all timelines. This is after Edward left Bella, and then after she jumped off of the cliff. After she left Forks I threw away the timeline...so don't worry about any events that have/will happen. Just enjoy!
Thanks for the review, I hope that the fact that this isn't following either the twilight or Angel timeline doesn't turn you off from this fic.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated