Not bad, but I have one question. This is an AU fiction right? because if not then the time lines for both series is pretty messed up. If it is then could you please explain what you have changed, it would really clear things up for me.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [29 May 10] • Not Rated
Geez Gunn. Just smile hug and accept. Dork. I loved how Bella just went all grr on the demon and whined like a little kid whose toy got taken when Angel killed it. That was cute. I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
FRED! He imprinted on Fred! That's awesome! Go Fred getting the hunky shapeshifter. WOOT! And I love how Bella told off Edward. LOL That was classic and beautiful I think I almost teared at that. So proud. LOL I'm sad it's almost over but I'll enjoy it to the end.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
I love this story so much! Spike/Bella is a really rare couple so I'm glad your doing this. How big of a problem are you goinng to make Edward? I'm hoping that the demon inside of Bella will hate him, just because it will be very interesting.
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! The Cullens! I knew they would show up with Jacob! I KNEW it! *happy dance* I win! LOL But omg I thought I would die without the update. So happy! T.T So very happy! Anyway awesome. So Bella's a demon now. Cool! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that the update made you so happy. lol. Originally I was going to have the Cullens show up after Jake, but I'm wanted to wrap this story up...so I had them come with Jake.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
How dare you end it there? You must continue as soon as possible. Today in fact. Please? This is such a fun story. I love the colors: black, blue, and purple. I can't wait to see how the Cullen's react to her demon. Will you keep her demon, or will you have Wesley find a way to get it out of her? 'Cause I vote for keeping the demon. It's a cool, new twist that makes Bella an equal to the demons.
Very cool. Do you have an idea of a name for the demon inside Bella? Will Bella and the demon be separate? Like two entities living in one body, or will they become one person? Oh, also, what do the tattoos look like and where exactly are they? Do they go all the way down her leg? Where do they stop basically?
Comments from author:
Unless I suddenly have a great change of heart, I will be leaving Bella with the demon. I think that after all Bella has been through she needs a little extra somethin'. Thanks so much for the review!
I missed the end of your review, and for some reason didn't even see the other questions! So here are my answers. Bella will name her demon. They will be separate. The tattoos are basicly black lines, though it's hard to explain in writting what they look like. They do go all the way down her leg, the last of them stops on her big toe. Hope this answered all of your questions!
Review By [legarde] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Not Rated
How could you!!! what an evil cliffie!!! urgh.... definitely not expecting the demon twist, that was really cool.... I can't wait for the next chapter!