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Review of chapter "Marvel girls ((Probably 1))" from LFW
Review:
Dazzler and She-Hulk are great characters but the Black Cat and the Scarlet Witch are amazing. Thanks. DC women next? How about some Sci-Fi movie women?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I try my dangdest to get them in at least a general approximation of their realistic personalities. I felt the She hulk one was a bit weak, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to try it and I felt it wasn't bad by any means. I think my favorite though was the Emma frost one. Dazzler was hard to write because I knew they couldn't end up in bed in the first place, Dazzlers a bit more innocent ad worried so she took some thinking but I'm pleased with how it turned out.

And yeah I'll probably do a Sci Fi women one later on, after the D.C. one.
Review By [LFW] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Marvel girls ((Probably 1))" from slmncpm
Review:
*smiles* i do, indeed, enjoy this story my dear. i know that ms fantastic is married.. but wouldn't it be funny to see X with her? or ororo? or.. hmmmmm janette from forever knight? or mina harker from league of extraordinary gentlemen? because yes, i do have a very twisted brain. *smiles sweetly*
Comments from author:
I may do a Jean Ms. Fantastic, and Ororo one since I figured my amazing fans would come up with more as time progressed.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Marvel girls ((Probably 1))" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
That was lovely. You know, Emma will appreciate the sneaky when she eventually finds out. That, or she'll just say she figured it out a while back but didn't want to rock the boat any more than he did.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it annoys me how far too often everyone makes Xander out to be a goody goody. h sure he wasn't really evil but he is a normal man. So I could see him havign some fun with Emma who though she was controlling him completely. I mean technically speaking he isn't lying to her she just assumes she's got him as her mental slave, when in reality he's been in control of himself the whole time.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Marvel girls ((Probably 1))" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written fun, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and the comment.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Marvel girls ((Probably 1))" from JediKnight
Review:
Very funny, I'm hoping that you'll have more soon.

Got a few Marvel women for you; Syran, Psylocke, Squirrel Girl, and Domino.
Comments from author:
Don't know much abotu squirrel girl or Domino but I'll try for as the gods said, the reviewers are the keys.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Hunters, Xander's Rayne, and X and X" from lorwen
Review:
good story...
Comments from author:
Thanks, another chapter shoudl be up VERY soon putting the finishing touches on it right now.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Hunters, Xander's Rayne, and X and X" from CrazyK
Review:
This series keeps getting better with each chapter. Other women could include

Jeannette: DC Comics Secret Six
Ukyo Kuonji: Ranma ½
Tiffany Lords: Rival Schools
Akira: Rival Schools
Sakura Kasugano: Street Fighter
Kasumi Todoh: Art of Fighting/King of Fighters
Giganta: Justice League Cartoon
Elizabeth Maxwell: V the series
Miho: Sin City
Harribel: Bleach
Lunch/Launch: Dragon Ball
Kagura: Inuyasha
Nuku Nuku: All Purpose Cultural Cat Girl Nuku Nuku
Lei-Lei and Hsien-Ko: Darkstalkers
Raven: Twisted Metal Black
Dollface: Twisted Metal Black
Jerrica Benton/Jem- Jem and the Holograms
Maleficent: Kingdom Hearts
Cover Girl: GI Joe
Wuya: Xiaolin Showdown
Alice: American McGee’s Alice
Gogo Yubarai: Kill Bill
Saya: Blood+
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I will, I might have to do a crazy chick one. Or maybe a killer chick one or something. Says, Gogo, Lunch, and Kagura would probably have to have at least a bit of blood in them.
Review By [CrazyK] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Hunters, Xander's Rayne, and X and X" from Tjin
Review:
Understandable points, all of them (A Few i would Debate but... It's Fanfic,)

I Forgot to add that it was a really interesting collection of ficlets, thanks for letting us read.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
Yups, the awesome thing about writing a fanfic is that if your a good enough writer you can make a gun that shoots rainbows and make it make sense. I'm not that good, so it will never be in any of my stories, but it's possible I'm sure.

Thanks, and thanks for the review. If you want your welcome to P.M. or Email me the things you'd like to debate, I'd be interested to hear them for a future story. I'm a large fan of the "Xander is a bad arse" stories, and most of mine involve it. My favorite machine gun is a Thompson Machine gun, but it's hard to find the right pistol for Xander.

I mean the symbolism ((yes I know, every idiot author has that, but I try not to be too obvious with it.)) is huge, the Tommy gun would have been VERY useful during the World War ((I want to say two, but I'm not sure.)), but it was too expensive, and by the time it was really noticed the war was coming to a close, so instead of being used by the soldiers the numbers made by the company making it were sold for somewhat cheap to gangsters.

A sawed off shotgun is another obvious choice for Xand, something simple, any gun shop has one, and yet with a bit of work, and time it becomes something easily ignored and yet able to make a body unidentifiable.

I tend to use a magnum or something for Xand, since I think stopping power is important, since bullets won't kill a demon by themselves, they tend to be hollow point since that does massive internal damage even to a vampire, and I sometimes go for 44. for the semi nerd Dirty Harry reference, but I'm somewhat at a loss.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Hunters, Xander's Rayne, and X and X" from Tjin
Review:
Hate to say this but, the Colt Python is a .357, Smith and Wesson make the .500 Supermagnum, you can't really 'scale' up the python to that extent without shredding the cylinder, replacing the barrel and reinforcing the entire frame, and even then the thinness of the cylinder would make it very dangerous to fire.

in other words it would be faster, cheaper, safer and far more likely to simply get a real fifty cal pistol.
Comments from author:
Um, magic?

Yeah I know that's a stupid worn out Deus Ex Machina.

I wanted Xander to have a revolver for a few reason the first being the Zippo reference. The second being because he was this kind of Cowboy esk person. The third being a slight reference to the second blood Rayne movie, and finally because I think revolver are the best gun, and I like them. Oh and of course a bit of a Dirty Harry reference.

So, I wanted Xander to have a bad arse revovler, but I wasn't sure if a .357 woudl have the kick I wanted. I wanted to show Xander not only believed in the old saying "Why kill when you can over kill" but followed it.

I wanted the demon's to just be these huge muscle heads with thick plating, and honestly I wasn't sure if the piercing power of the .357 would be as impressive. I mean I wanted blood flying EVERYWHERE, the walls painted with their blood, and while a .357, or .44 might have gotten the job, I wanted something that if it hit you you were dead regardless of thick armor like skin.

Also, I wanted the loud "BOOM" which a non silenced five hundred magnum round would probably deafen everyone in a confined space for thirty to forty minutes.

Also, I just like the look of the Python more than the look of a Five Hundred, I have no issues with it, but the Python looks like a gun that if you get pointed at yourself your gonna die. While I'm not saying the Five hundred doesn't, I think it looks a little funny the elongated barrel, the recoil decreasing length.

Also, I wanted something somewhat easy to hide if needed be, and a Python is easier to hide than a Five hundred.

So yeah, while I didn't know the specific reasons it was stupid ((I for some reason think .44 and .357 bullets are interchangeable, and I have no idea why.)) I figured their was a reason, and the simplest one is the ever faithful Deus Ex Machina of magic.

Maybe the thing is made form melted down crosses like a gun of Alucards form Hellsing? Maybe strengthening charms or runes, or even spells are on the cylinder, and pistol?

So yeah, thanks for the comment, I'm sorry I'm not the most accurate gun guy, but I am interested in guns, and I'm glad you reviewed. Feel free to call me out on ANY things like this you happen across. I don't mind and it's interesting to here the facts behind the weapons I love to much.

But this is why I tend to stick to Forty Five's, decent stopping power, a nice clip feed, even if their is the chance of jamming unlike a revolver, I'll keep this and what you said in mind if I reference a gun again.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "B J, Heart +Air, Dem Bones, ((And others))" from dorkmoon
Review:
Ariel (the Little Mermaid)
April O'Neil (Ninja Turtles)
Arcee (Transformers)
Seras Victoria (Helsing)
Susan Sto Helit (Discworld)
either Luna Lovegood or Bellatrix Lestrange (Harry Potter)
Mystique (X-Men)
American Maid (Tick-animated)
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "B cup, Passonate red Head, Magic + Demon = Lucky?" from JediKnight
Review:
Hoping you'll add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "B cup, Passonate red Head, Magic + Demon = Lucky?" from ChiVayne
Review:
Nice story. If Xander is a (female) demon magnet, how about Hild (Ah My Goddess)?
Alien magnet - Ryoko from Tenchi Muyo?
Human - does Max Guevara (Dark Angel) qualify?
Comments from author:
Hild and Ryoko will probably go in an anime chapter their are so many fun ladies.

Max on the other hand I don't know a lot abotu so I can't do much with her.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "B cup, Passonate red Head, Magic + Demon = Lucky?" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Tara (Terra: Teen Titans) Markov
Princess Drusilla (Wonder Girl: Wonder Woman TV Show)
Tigra (Avengers: Marvel Universe)
Modesty Blaise
Bellitrix Black
Sara Pezeni (Witchblade)
She (She: The Movie) Perhaps in Africa
She Lobo (Lobo's Back:DC Comic Mini-Series) To Quote the main man upon discovering his new Gender, "I'm a Dame, a Broad, a Female, a She.
Judy Jetson (The Jetsons)
Lori Lemaris (Mermaid girlfriend of Superman)
CatWoman
The Cheetah
She-Ra
Silver Sable
Circuit Breaker
Tabitha Stephens
The Dazzeler
Morgan LeFay
Electro Woman & Dyna Girl (Why Break up the set)
Linka (Captain Planet's Wind Girl)
Elle Woods (Cheif Justice of the Supreme Court)
Rahne Sinclair
G-Girl
Ms. Mystic
Just to name a few possible interesting matches

Peace
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll probably throw some of these in, some of them I've never heard of, but it might be interesting.

I might do a chapter that's just marvel girls.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "B cup, Passonate red Head, Magic + Demon = Lucky?" from ferball
Review:
Loved the Buttercup bit. Can just see Xan stumbling across Bubbles & Blossom's kidnappers and having all three girls start fighting over him... Or Xan start arguing with Mojo Jojo! Or dragging him home to meet the professor who's just perfected a formula with snips & snails & puppy dogs and a little bit of the X stuff to spill all over Xan...

down, bunny, down!

jen
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I'm trying to keep them shortish but if you have good ideas feel free to make your own story.
Review By [ferball] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "B cup, Passonate red Head, Magic + Demon = Lucky?" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
not bad liked the buttercup part, and the jenine one was good too but the raven part was a bit short would like to see more of that pairing.
For sugestions marvels Scarlet Witch or Mystique, a time traveling Seven of Nine, Belana Tores or Jadzia Dax from various star trek series, or maybe someone just a little strange like Luna Lovegood from the Potterverse or Lydia Deetz From Beetlejuice any of these could be interesting and I don't think I've seen any of them other that Mystique done before. keep up the good work
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll use some of these in the update, thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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