She made us whole with her abuse and violence, and made us realize what pitiful perverts we really are. And if we argue, she hurts us. We had it coming.
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I'm not sure what your reason for leaving this comment is, or how it applies to this short crossover story. Who are you talking about? No one in this story is described in that manner, and I am rather confused as to your review.
Just randomly looking at stories written by authors on my favorite list when I ran across this little ditty and really enjoyed it. It might not be the longest but was really well written and enjoyable to read hope your muse comes back to this and we might see Buffy having to sport her sailor suit as seen in the "surprise" chapter and find out what her sailor name is. To help your muse a little I once had a challenge up here "it's sence vanished" that had Buffy actually being usagi how and why she got to America using the name Buffy Summers left up to the author
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
does that make her sort of princess of the Earth (if she is Earth shenshi) or just Shenshi (or however its spelled) or something? Cuz Mars, Venus, Jupiter and Mercury are all princesses of their planets
I wonder if Mercury (or any of the others) can convince her to say 4 words again I mran she probably can transform came back different so and I just had a picture of Spike trying to sneak a peak under her skirt after she says those 4 words again
evil grin
Imagining Buffy (with anime vain popping) standing over Spike who lies in a crater twitching with lots of bumps on his head
happy image
Btw I'm so tracking all your stories from now on.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]