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Review of chapter "To Remember" from Cardona
you are a very prolific writer (with respect to anime and / or manga) there are not many like this ...
just ... I want more.

Mr. Cardona (Werner Markus)
Review By [Cardona] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To Remember" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
+ Good grammar and syntax.
+ Nice introduction of the cross-characters
- Not much to give a review on at this point

Maybe you could fill in a little more Buffy introspection for plot exposition at the beginning?
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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