Review of chapter "To Remember" from DaedalusWorks
you are a very prolific writer (with respect to anime and / or manga) there are not many like this ...
just ... I want more.
Mr. Cardona (Werner Markus)
Review By [DaedalusWorks
] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To Remember" from Dianasis
+ Good grammar and syntax.
+ Nice introduction of the cross-characters
- Not much to give a review on at this point
Maybe you could fill in a little more Buffy introspection for plot exposition at the beginning?
Review By [Dianasis
] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]