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Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
The lighter side is hilarious! Keep it up!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my.... Murphy seems to be following Xander...
at least they have a relationship spiced up by surprising events ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from grundy
Review:
The only bad part about this story is that I didn't find it sooner! Xander + Abby = awesome! Love it!
Review By [grundy] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from SpikesChewToy
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Fantastic inner monologue of Abby's, you really captured her spirit, which is hard to do with not much dialogue, love the "magically growing phallus of steel" - brilliant.
I love the way's the 2 groups have gone about the whole 'shovel talk' very cool.
The GPP was great, especially as their main contact with the ICWS is through the one-eyed pirate like man!

just curious, as I'm not from America, what exactly does the sign Abby used mean?

keep up the good work!
Review By [SpikesChewToy] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nicely done.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice new part and a typical Xander day I would say, but at least the girl is still there :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from lunalurker
Review:
Oh, I almost squee with the cuteness, yay!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from physicsteach
Review:
I know I commented on this already, but I have to gush a little bit more.

First, "dirty hot eyesex" wins so hard I have no words to adequately explain how hard it wins. Second, the romance novel white-knight thing that comes back in the end: shiny. Way shiny.
Third, Abby would so have loved McGee getting trying to figure out how to intimidate Xander along with Gibbs and Ziva, and there's no way McGee could manage it.
Fourth, I'd think that Xander wouldn't be too scared of Gibbs, but a knife-wielding hot chick? Fear to the bone.
Comments from author:
It was going to be 'dirrty hot eyesecks' (as an LJ comment-speak shout out), but I thought I'd get reamed for spelling again. *grin*
What a shock it would be for Gibbs to learn that there's someone who's not scared of him! Hmm... that has possibilities. Given that the majority of Xander's co-workers could probably WAY out-ninja Ziva, I can't see him exactly cowering, but he certainly would be a little nervous.
I'm all about the cyclical narratives these days, a bad habit I've actually picked up from *reading* fic. Is 'shiny' a good thing?
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from mackenziex
Review:
Xander + Abby = Epic Win. I'm pretty sure Abby is exactly the kind of girl Xander needs. She's not going to run screaming from the weirdness of his life and she's not going to kill him. And bonus, they're cute together!
Comments from author:
I never even considered it until someone gave me a nudge in that direction. Now I'm kinda in love with the idea. Glad you agree!
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from HarmMarie
Review:
Loved the way this was written.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from slmncpm
Review:
these are fantastic! please keep on!
Comments from author:
Oh, there's plenty more where that came from. ;)
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from DeaconKrow
Review:
That's just awesome. Always been a fan of this paring and this is no exception. Really enjoying it, but if you write more some more dialogue would be nice. Hope to read more in this series. thanks.
Comments from author:
The list of potential fic ideas is expanding by the minute. It's a little scary really. I tend to bounce between introspection and dialogue, depending on the mood of the fic and what I want it to say, as well as who's saying it. Future stories will likely have more dialogue. :)

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
Review:
Love it! Very sweet, in a beheading a demon on a date kind of way. :) I love Abby's thoughts re Xander and their whatever-ship. Also nice to see that Buffy and Dawn were looking out for Xander, along with Buffy's assistance with the outfit for the date. Loved the bits about Gibbs and the teams' reactions to Xander as well. I really like that both "families" are looking out for their own. I can see Tim and Xander bonding eventually. Too funny about the GPP incident, I can see Willow doing that. Fun look at the growing relationship between Abby and Xander and nice glimpse of what's going on with the rest of the teams as well.
Comments from author:
It wouldn't be a proper Xander-date without some kind of demon appearing. The next couple of stories in the series will be somewhere in between the two existing ones, so some things will be filled out as we go. Thanks for the awesome review :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knights and Parrots" from Shanna
Review:
This was made of awesome. Abby's my favorite character on NCIS (excited to see her on the 2nd episode of NCIS: LA, too!) and you have her inner voice down pat. Loved the line about the expanding phallus of steel (can't remember exact phrasing, but it made me laugh).

Also, it sounds like McGee will be avoiding any pet shop crime scenes after his parrot encounter.

Excellent chapter in your series. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
That's my favourite line, actually. :) Thanks for taking the time to review.
Review By [Shanna] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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