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KrysstiniaReview:
This is a sweet, heartbreaking, story. I wish I could write tear-jerking moments like this. Keep up the good work.
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Krysstinia] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ShyBobReview:
Bittersweet but nice, and definitely in character for both shows. I thought maybe it would be Dawn's turn to step into the light at the end, but it would have been too cliched.
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ShyBob] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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MarcusRowlandReview:
Interesting idea - though I guessed wrongly that the punchline would be that Dawn had reaped Buffy's soul while they were talking, a few seconds before she is killed by some bizarre accident.
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MarcusRowland] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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MountainWilliamReview:
Well done!
A good story and you handled the DLM cross subtly.
Review By [
MountainWilliam] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]