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Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from serenityselena
Review:
amusing story...
poor Tim... he doesn`t know what awaits him *smirk*
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
poor McGee :) or better damn that lucky guy?

I hope you continue this little series
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from Caira
Review:
Of course, this isn't going to *dis*courage McGee from playing the hero . . .
Comments from author:
There's nothing like being baled up by a smokin' hot vampire slayer to make a man think about going out on random nights, hunting for vampires. *grin*
Review By [Caira] • Date [12 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
I meant to review this on reading it... RL just took over...

I agree with your readers so far - you took the pairing and made it work beautifully, without losing either character's voice or 'style' - outstanding work.

I can't wait for the next one [especially DiNozzo's reaction.]

It's about time Tim [and Faith too] got the GOOD they deserved in a relationship.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from Wormbait
Review:
Very good fic, and a surprisingly good paring.

Although if I remember correctly Tim has has some truely gorgeous girlfriends in the past that we see glimpses of or pictures when Tony goes snooping in his Ipod. So he must certainly have something to offer in the boyfriend department. Who knows Faith may be the one in for a pleasant surprise later that night. Which would mean extra embarrassment for Tim as we all know Faith wouldn't be able to keep from bragging about something like that.

Well done and thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
The gorgeous girl turned out to be his sister though, so he lost alll bragging rights on that one. But you're right - there will definitely be a little bit of bragging ;)
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from dreameralways
Review:
At least you know McGee would never cheat on her or treat her badly, though he may forget her birthday. I'd love a short story on his after thoughts for that night.
Comments from author:
Can't see Faith being too concerned with birthdays, so he's probably in luck. Also, Faith might be the one to inflict a little of the 'bad' on sweet innocent Tim. You'll be able to read the consequences of riding in cars with Slayers soon enough. *grin*
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from Missingviolet
Review:
haha! this is so funny!
good work!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from Samarkand
Review:
I've heard you say elsewhere that you felt this McGee voice was too much akin to Xander's. Really, if I had to make a comparison with a BtVS char, it would be Willow's. And I feel it is uniquely McGee's. He has a bit of Xander's early haplessness, a bit of Willow's wry geekiness, and a whole lot of his own unique nature.

The "red light behavior" made me chuckle, too.
Comments from author:
Well, if nearly sinking your fangs into someone's neck isn't red light behaviour, then I don't know what is. It's somewhere between red and black (black=murder).

Hope you didn't injure yourself with all that flailing before *grin*
Review By [Samarkand] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from physicsteach
Review:
Faith having a thing for Jimmy Olsen types explains so much . . .
Comments from author:
I was gonna go with 'Zeppo' to tie in with the Xander-sex, but it didn't really fit. Glad you enjoyed.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from spring
Review:
I can so see Tim doing this. I really really love this wonderful series so far and I am very eager to see what comes next.
Comments from author:
He does have an air of long-forgotten chivalry about him, doesn't he? Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [spring] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from Sandi
Review:
I love Abby and Xander but Faith and McGee rocks!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it ;)
Review By [Sandi] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story was terrific! Very nice job on both Faith's and McGee's characters. And you put in many laughs. I especially liked: Women, he corrects himself as a long-gone but still indignant voice echoes in his head. Sorry, Kate. Lol! Nice to see somebody still remembers Kate. I just hope McGee survives Hurricane Faith. Not to mention, fully intact and functional. Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm shamelessly pro-Ziva, but I think Kate had a hand in making McGee who he was. And it's kinda fun to think of Faith.. um.. breaking him in a little. *evil grin*

Thanks for the great review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing the Hero" from slmncpm
Review:
omg faith and mcgeek! that is awesome!!! can i request more of them too? as well as xander and abby?? like maybe more than a one chapter quickie? although i have to say i like quickies.. heh.
Comments from author:
There's definitely more of both pairings to come. :)
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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