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Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from bookworm
Review:
This is fun! I hope you have time/inspiration to continue it soon.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from JonnWolfe
Review:
I rather like this. Hope you continue it soon!
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from LisaZ
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I like this one. I love Faith & either The Doctor or Jack, I love how the stories come about, cause she's one of my favorite characters on Buffy. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [LisaZ] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from DamianAzrael
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lol read the first chapter and was like holy crap Faith is The Master's kid and in love with The Doctor it disturbingly fits wonder why The Master sent her through a chameleon arch though oh wait duh time war it definitely explains her daddy complex with him as a father. I can see much angst in the future if The Doctor is her love interest torn loyalties and all should she betray and kill her father to save the man she loves or betray and kill the man she loves to stay loyal to her father hmmm can't wait to see if i'm right so i'm off to the next chapter! Heh stalked by an inanimate object most certainly terrifying heh even worse can you imagine being stalked by the one ring or a glowing sword of something like that i can i would run screaming about not wanting a destiny or something just to be locked up in a loony bin because no one can see them but me lol. god that was random i should go to bed instead of reading the other chapters but i just can't. :D
Review By [DamianAzrael] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from mimijikazananyi
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Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Review By [mimijikazananyi] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from AllenPitt
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one wonders if at some point Faith WILL regenerate, go back in time and turn out to be one of the main BvS characters.... like Jenny Calendar or something weird like that ....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from MarcusSLazarus
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Oh yeah...

Another EXCELLENT bit of work; not only does Faith get to see the past Doctors, but she's left with a disturbing insight into regeneration that leaves her INCREASINGLY uncomfortable about doing it herself.

Plus, of course, her thoughts on the Doctor's past selves were excellent; slightly attracted- or she at least wouldn't say 'no' if they were interested- to the Third and Eighth, surprised at the First's age, thinks the Fifth and Sixth had odd clothing tastes, creeped out by the Second (Interesting way to feel given that he always struck me as the Doctor's most timid incarnation given that he actually SHOWED when he was afraid of his enemies), struck by the similarities between the Fourth and Ninth, and just thinking of the Seventh as 'fatherly'...

All in all, a highly enjoyable chapter; I look forward to seeing what happens when they finally meet Miss Hartigan next chapter!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from MarcusSLazarus
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Interesting job there, to say the least; Faith gets a chance to test her mettle against one of the Doctor's classic enemies, and further clues have been planted about the true identity of Jackson Lake (Nice explanation regarding how Faith realises who he really is, on that topic).

Hope the next chapter's coming soon (As I said in my last review, I'm looking forward to seeing Faith's reaction to the images of the first nine Doctors)!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from AllenPitt
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well, at least she wasn't trying to fight a Dalek... hm, so Torchwood is over in London in the present, and there's a spike lookalike from the future.....that's got to be weird...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from krittab
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Wow! This is great! I can't wait to read more. Are you planning on getting Faith and the Doctor together, 'cause that would be neat. I'm sure however you write it, it will be neat. You seem to have a handle on the writing. :)
Review By [krittab] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Almadynis
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Very intriguing. Can't wait for more!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from MarcusSLazarus
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Oh yeah... now THIS is going to be interesting!

Faith VS the Cybermen? What's not to like about THAT concept?

Just one request; look at Faith's reaction when she sees the Doctor's past incarnations, could you? I have to wonder what she'd think about the idea of the Tenth Doctor having looked like- for example- the SECOND Doctor at one point...

On a longer-term note, you've definitely had some VERY interesting chapters lately; your discussions about how the Guardians fit into the Buffyverse were EXCELLENT (Particularly the theory that Whistler's the Guardian of Equilibrium; intriguing idea, I have to admit).

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
lol, yeah Patrick Troughton was pretty goofy looking. :) I'll have to think of some good reactions for that part. Hmmm.....

And I'm glad you liked the past few chapters! Once I thought of the idea of The First being The Black Guardian the other stuff sort of fell into place.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from AllenPitt
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poor Faith. I can only imagine what the website will say. next up: try to work in some old Dr. Who familiar faces.. old companions. that sort of thing.
Comments from author:
There will be meetings with old companions coming up, and I plan to write a version of whatever happens in the "End of Time" coming during Christmas. so reunions with the Master will happen as well. Yay! I can't wait until that comes out. Although at the same time I'll be really sad to see David Tennant go. I'll also includ the upcoming ep. of the Sarah Jane Adventures that the Doctor is going to be making an appearance in, which should be fun. :)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from RabidReject
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Awesome!
Review By [RabidReject] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from AllenPitt
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They must, must meet one or more of his former companions. Who will at first glance think he's gotten yet another new one... boy will they be surprised.
Hey--I wonder if Jasmine was one of this group of 'meddlers' ?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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