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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from bradsan
Review:
Oh love it. I read the first and this one again.

Great update
Comments from author:
Thanks sorry about the long wait between updates. Glad you liked it. If you like these I have another series that's roughly the same backing. Its the same back story just another take on it pretty much called cousins with the same taste. :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
This story actually has a lot of potential to be really good, but, it is quite jarring to read in terms of format, etc. I think you should try to see about finding a Beta. It would take this from potentially great, to really great.

Good luck!
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from bradsan
Review:
Darn still good and still waiting.

does Buffy gone use a shield to protect her from the incoming bullet. Faith will be thrilled when she noticed what the bullets can do. Can it kill all demons or does it have limits.

Still waiting for the next update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from bradsan
Review:
aww you update and stopped that is just so mean.
quick update please.
Comments from author:
Lol......thanks and I will try my best to update before I just didn't know where I wanted to take it now that I do shouldn't be to long before another update :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from WoolWytch
Review:
I would suggest looking into a beta reader. It is a promising story and you have promise.
Review By [WoolWytch] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from bradsan
Review:
hope you will comeback soon because I really want to read more.

Love it.
Comments from author:
Thanks......yea I've been planning on it for a long time but either I didn't have enough time or a serious case of writers block. I'm just not sure where to take it.........I'll try to update soon.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Wow! Buffy certainly knows a LOT of people. Sure would have appreciated it if the author had been able to continue writing this story!!! I like the idea of Buffy being a Halliwell!
Comments from author:
It actually will continue I just haven't really figured out where I quiet want to take it just yet but I will get back to it once I figure it out.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Kaleidofox
Review:
I really enjoy reading this series, and I think the idea for it is original and entertaining.

I am just a tad bit confused about the tattoo thing. I do like the idea for it, don't get me wrong, and this is the only story I've read that has had the ones in the final battle get some sort of mark that binds them together, but I am a bit confused about Buffy's letter. I understand everyone has a letter for someone they lost in the fight against evil, though not necessarily someone lost in the battle with the First. So yeah, the 'A' makes sense to some part of me, since she did technically lose Angel, but if I'm right that they got the tattoos after Sunnydale collapsed, Buffy had already sort of moved on (first love, you never really forget, so she'll always love him, just not "be in love with" him) from Angel was with Spike. And considering Angel still lived, even though she had "lost" him, Spike died in the final battle.

But then you have Angel the Series to consider, in which it is debated if Angel survived that fight.

I am really sorry to nit-pick about this; I just want to make sure I am following how you are choosing to portray Buffy. Y'know, since some people strictly ship B/A and say she was just friends with Spike. I just want to clarify all this so I can better understand the events you have set the story to take place in.

...I really hope all this makes sense. And I am not trying to offend you at all; I really do like the story. I am just a tad bit confused, is all.
Comments from author:
Don't worry about it I get that you're not trying to offend me. I liked Spike but I don't think that him and Buffy truely belonged together. I believe that she always truely belonged with Angel. I think that on some level there is no possible way for her to ever fall out of love with Angel. I mean look at the episode with the mora demon in Angel when he turned human again she was with him as soon as she found out. Even though she probably loved Spike I don't think she could ever love him as much as she loved Angel. That is why she put an "A" in her tattoo instead of an "S" for Spike.

I hope that clarifies any confusion you may have about her tattoo. If not feel free to ask anything you want and I will try to clarify things as much as possible.

Thanks for the review and thanks for reading I'll try to update as soon as I can so you don't have to wait too much longer to see what happens next... :)
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Eureka
Review:
*Wonders why she has never seen this story before.*
Nice story...Buffy a Holliwell.. Hope you keep writing on this one. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
It has been up for a while now...Not that many people have Buffy as a Halliwell and that something I've always seen her as so I figured why not write it...Thanks for the review... :)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from immortalsilence
Review:
you are such a tease more chapters pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Angeleus
Review:
I like it. Please update soon.
Review By [Angeleus] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Holy crap, Batman! She really gets around.
Comments from author:
Yeah well typical Halliwell
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from immortalsilence
Review:
oohhh things are looking good more chapters pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from immortalsilence
Review:
oh the plot thickens, more chapters pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [22 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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