It's almost like there might be a sequel or something. What is the slayer's position on the now-legal vampires? I think in the Anita books it's stated that they're only legal in the US, elsewhere it'd still be open season...I really can't see the slayers not going after the vampire council & its minions...

Slayers kill demonic (Buffy-style) vamps on sight, and kill bloodline (Anita Blake) vamps whenever they stick a toe out of line, which they don't do very often (or at least, not where the Council might find out). Bloodline vamps consider demonic vamps to be twisted abominations, and think of Slayers as genocidal vamp-hating psychopaths.

And here comes Buffy! Chaos will surely follow - even more than before!

This was good.

Eagerly anticipating the next chapter, as much as I am hating to see this end. It has been a fun read.

Harry Potter may be a master of the wizarding world but he needs a bit of help in the muggle world doesn't he?
Harry and Anita make a great team I think.
Keep up the great writing!

Very funny update. I loved that the vampires were all so very entertained by Harry's reactions to Analiese.
Looking forward to the next update.

HP with all the marks would become incredibly powerful, same/same for his master. I doubt he'd be any less than the vamp's #1 servant at that point. Place on the council for it also, no doubt. Wizarding world will not react well once the word gets out, I bet.
Neat story! Thanks!

yay! More please!

And Harry as a Human Servant... Whoa! Is Ginny dead? I notice that this is part of a series but I'm not sure if the necessary background information is in there or if we find out in this story.

Thanks for posting :)

Excellent premise for a crossover. You've captured Anita's tone very well.

My only point of critique is that you need to separate the paragraphs so things are not so cluttered.

I really enjoy this story, but the formatting of this chapter is awful. There is no separation between paragraphs, and the first line isn't indented. It makes it annoying to read.

Very interesting update. I liked the bit about the memory sharing.
But darn it! Can't they get rid of MacNair already!?

yikes. She can open the marks wide, and they just might end up regretting going after her. And that's even before Harry Potter races into the room. heh.

This story is excellent. Well written with consistent characterization. Only the second enjoyable Anita Blake/HP crossover I've ever read (the other is Mhalachai's Inevitable). I only actually made it through the first six or so Anita Blake books before I gave up on them, but I'm very glad I stumbled across this story.

I love that you made Harry competent. It's always more enjoyable to read about smart/competent main characters then dumb/incompetent one's. I've heard it said that if a plot only works because one of the main characters is stupid then the plot is stupid, and I completely agree.

The only thing I'm not big on is the whole Harry might be a vampire servant thing. I'm guessing it's that vampire Olivia you've mentioned a few times, but I hope it's something else entirely. Maybe his curse scar, or Master of Death status, or anything really. Although those would take some explaining, heh. I mostly don't want him to be a real vampire's servant because it would have occurred entirely off screen, which I never like. We haven't even been introduced to the Olivia character. Perhaps Harry would be able to resist a vampire's orders with occlumency/magic, so that's a plus I suppose.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to future chapters.

Wow. Interesting and mature point of view. i really liked this story. How to see more of it soon. curious as to what harry has been doing with his time? how does he have the first make. does he know the vampire master from scotland?

boy, based on that conversation Anita will have a lot of questions. If not for her connection to the Master of the City she'd probably find herself obliviated in short order, too. As is, J C's connections should get them some info in short order...
And it looks like nabbing McNair leads to another baddie...