I love how you explained each character so well by showing their dreams. Buffy often said her dream was to be normal but I'd have to agree that she wouldn't be happy if she ever got it. I'll assume that she didn't pick up because she is on her way to join her brothers and be a family again. That makes this story one with a happy ending :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Ooh...I like the way you made the crossover work. Poor Dean...I think you really captured the essence of his character but it still makes for a heart-rending narrative.
Review By [Takarameri] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
*wordless gush* *ahem* Normally if I see a story all full of second person, I can't stand to read it, but once I got past the first paragraph, I barely even noticed the unusual voice. And actually, I think it kinda worked better than had it been in first or third. So- *continues gushing*
So you stated that Buffy is a bit suicidal and then don't have her pick up the phone as Dean finally thinks he's getting his dream. Very ominous and kind of reads like she's dead. So ultimately no one gets what they want. How sad. Very well written even if POV is a bit confusing sometimes. Nice work.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Not Rated
hmm, I could see this being continued, but I like it as it is as well. Dean's head is always fun to peak into, and Buffy fits in well with the Winchesters
Wonderful, beautiful and sad. I loved this, well done. I always thought that Buffy was a lot more broken than her friends and Joyce would acknowledge. The ending was perfect. Thank you for writing this. If you ever got inspiration to continue, maybe add Dawn's dream, that would definitely be interesting and I would love to read it.
HiltonK
softly
