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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Vickzie
Review:
Well that's an interesting conundrum. Please update some more soon
Comments from author:
Thank you :) i'm struggling with uni and work etc but i'll be free in april
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Silver
Review:
I really am enjoying this, and am wondering how Dawn knows Jackson - that is how much work did he do either with or for the Watcher's Council. Also, would like to see Mcgee get a little more with the program. I know he's shy , but Yeesh! they could have gone out for coffee or something. Okay - , as much as I love this I need to ask if you have stopped writing this. The last update was 7 months ago, and in a response to a review back in July, you said you were planning on getting another chapter out soon. I know you are in school/college, and boy do I know how that can eat up your time (and your brain at times), and you also seem to be concentrating on your other story "I'm with Child". BTW - what a horrible cliffie! I mean really! Labor while in Moldey shorts' dungeon?! At least it wasn't a stopped/stuck elevator during an earthquake - how cliche. Where was I ? Oh yeah - Please let me know if you have stopped writing this - a shame really if you have - and when and if you plan on getting back to it. Because I would like to see the Dawn/McGee pairing even if that means Dawn has to make the first move. Would also like to see Tim become a little more aggressive/tough. Am also wondering if any of the supernatural part of Dawn's life will run into or be discovered by Gibbs. does Abby know about Buffy and things that go bump in the night? Keep up the good work and update soonest!
Comments from author:
Thank you....I'm having a writers block with this story....I will attempt something though just for you
Review By [Silver] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Krispy
Review:
So was Jackson a Watcher or a consultant for the Watcher's Council? And was this before the old Watcher's council blew up?
Comments from author:
I haven't worked that out yet, am starting the next chapter tomorrow
Review By [Krispy] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Lette
Review:
Awesome story. Can't wait to see if/when/how Gibbs finds out about the slayer/watcher stuff.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Have exams for a week will update after them :)
Review By [Lette] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from spk
Review:
OMG! What a twist?! Loved your idea of Dawn knowing Jackson but definitely didn't expect how. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [spk] • Date [8 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from serenityselena
Review:
a very interesting chapter...
more things to intrigue people...
can`t wait to read more ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you :) will update when computer is fixed
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [3 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from FelixDewmnshyte
Review:
I think Dawn should most definitely know Gibbs' father. Love the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [FelixDewmnshyte] • Date [16 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Fionfee
Review:
Gibbs father as a watcher, can he be?
For he is old and traveled a lot, you see!
Comments from author:
Oh thank you i can totally see it :)
Review By [Fionfee] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from serenityselena
Review:
things are going well for Dawn ...
it would be interesting if she somehow knew Gibbs` father ...
can`t wait to read more ^__^
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I'm thinking something to do with jail...maybe
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from serenityselena
Review:
love the title and the plot ....
things will sure get more and more interesting ...
eagerly awaiting to read the next chapters ^__^
Comments from author:
Thank you :)

Started the next chapter gotta do essays so will be up in a couple of days
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story. To find out more about NCIS training, google 'NCIS training' or go to http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1171014/how_to_become_an_ncis_special_agent.html.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from GreydonCreed
Review:
The easiest way to get to get Dawn hired on is as a civilian contract employee, due to her language skills (IRL LE/intel agencies are *screaming* for people with proficiency in certain Mid Eastern and Asian languages). Dawn would be able to assist in investigations, and while she could not do arrests herself, she would have a fed LEO ID and weapon authorization. Meanwhile, she would work at NCIS as an intern until her hire paperwork and background are completed.

Good story, look forward to moar.

Edit: Technically speaking, ALL NCIS agents are civilians, even Gibbs, who is still in the Marine reserves. While everyone else are known as Special Agents, Dawn can be referred to as a Specialist/Contract Agent or Contractor (cue the construction worker jokes for the jeans clad newbie).

And tv canon aside, Dawn would have to go through NCIS Academy to become a full agent (Ziva was an exception that rarely happens in RL).
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I will work that into the next chapter. So when i introduced Dawn, should i say that this is our civilan employee Dawn Summers
Review By [GreydonCreed] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Sorry - I think you're greatly underestimating the difficulty of becoming an agent - if I'm reading the real NCIS site correctly it's a long training course similar to the FBI, run by the Federal Law Enforcement Training Center, or equivalent experience with another law enforcement or intelligence agency (as with Tony, Kate, Ziva), not something where the boss can casually say "you're hired" and give a totally untrained person a badge and a gun.

About the best she might get is a job as a translator or other employee, not an agent, or an internship to be followed by training. She definitely wouldn't be an agent of any sort, not even probationary, without the appropriate training.

edit - The FBI course seems to be about 20 weeks, I'd guess NCIS is about the same.
Comments from author:
Thank you I knew she could not but did not know what to put. I will change it to internship and with a couple days of changing that continues weekly. Do you know how long it would be to become an probationary agent
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from twlight
Review:
I love these. I am eagerly awaiting more.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [twlight] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)etznab
Review:
I like the story. You captured the NCIS characters very well. My suggestion is that you change the language that Dawn translates to something other than Latin. That is too common, especially in the military. Someone else would of recognized it almost immediately.
Comments from author:
Thank you :) and i may use that suggest :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)etznab] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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