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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SpacedCadet
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PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE finish this !
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from aveave
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Good story. Are you going to continue writing it?
Review By [aveave] • Date [25 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from nightshadowlife
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i like it... so completly out of character but awesome none the less
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spring
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Wow, I love this so far. I wonder what made Buffy change her mind about Jack being in her and Dawn's life. I eagerly await the next installment of this so far wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from maddog
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Short Chapters but very nicely done
Review By [maddog] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ebony
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I can imagine Buffy and Dawn in Eureka it would be totally hilarious.
Review By [ebony] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from zafaran
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Interesting beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go from here with this. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spacey
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poor jack
Review By [spacey] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
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Great chapter, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from nightshadowlife
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awesome chapter, I would love to see Dawn and Buffy live in Eureka!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from hamrensel
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Wonderful. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [hamrensel] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mousemt
Review:
Nice start. Hope you're inspired again!
Review By [mousemt] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightshadowlife
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Awesome start, I like it already and can't wait to see what you have cooked up for this story!!!!!
If your looking for someone to beta I'd be more than happy to do so for you. My email is jessica.burt@cox.net
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hamrensel
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I reread you story tonight and saw dreameralways review. When I wrote the challenge I didn't even think of their ages. In the pilot Jack says that he was born on 5/13/69. If you want to stick to cannon Buffy's birthday is January 1981 & Dawn's birth year is 1987. Zoe said in "Have a Ice Day" that she was a junior in high school so she would have to be either 16/17 so that would make sure birth year 1992/1993. If you want to keep the kids' birthdays the same and the collapse of Sunnydale in 2003 I would just move Jack birthday to like 1963. So he would be like 18 when Buffy was born, 24 with Dawn, and 29 with Zoe. Just a thought.
Review By [hamrensel] • Date [11 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Wow! Great writing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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