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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alynambered
Review:
An exceptional addition to this series.

Lovely way you paired Xander & Vi.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm pretty pleased with how the fic came together. It's not great literature but it gives me a happy when I reread it and see reviews from those who feel the same.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lorwen
Review:
good story...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. By the holidays I hope to have another crossover "south of the border" added to the series.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from missinglink
Review:
Good job here. There is a nice poignancy or almost bittersweet tone to it that comes across nicely. Much better as a cross than the Usual forray. Some of the speech for Andy seemed a little off, but considering you covered that up by making the movie be just that, a movie about real events, made a nice way to explain any off bits or slightly skewed things. Saves you arguements with those that love nothing but critisizing. Solid take and again a good feel to the fic overall. It just fits (best way I can phrase it) both with BTVS and the world in which Shawshank existed. Bravo and well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks for another thoughtful interview. The pieces just seemed to click a little better when I tossed around the idea of the movie. I'm proud of the fact that I didn't resort to making Andy a long-lost relative of Xander's...the poor kid's got to be related to half the planet by now :)
Review By [missinglink] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from valdimarian
Review:
I love your stories, and your unique twist on Vi and Xander being together.

I had a thought though, while they're down in Mexico, I suspect Vi and Xander might have heard about a certain Demon Bar named The Titty Twister and how a preacher, his two kids, and a gangster on the run from the FBI, took down a whole Kiss of vampires. (From Dusk Til Dawn, there's only 2 x-overs with it on this site)
Comments from author:
Oh, valdimarian, no!!! There were only two good things about that movie: Salma Hayek and Sal...wait, no, the groin-gun. Yeah. Not gonna attempt to tackle that crossover. Sorry :(

But I'm glad to see you enjoyed Xander and Vi. I've found they strike a chord with people. I'm hoping they get more print time now that Felicia Day is more famouser (search "Date My Avatar" on YouTube).
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tabee
Review:
That made me cry.

A lovely story, I felt smart when I clued in who it was when Xander did!

What an awesome crossover!

Thanks for sharing! Happy writing!

Tabee :)
Comments from author:
Wow, kind feedback! I hadn't meant it to be a tear-jerker; I thought it would be bittersweet at worst. I was actually thinking happy thoughts for Andy, with surviving relatives who he might see once in a while over the years, and for Red, who got to have life and a family after prison. I'm relieved that I dropped enough hints before the end...I always feel punked when I can't decode a crossover.
Review By [Tabee] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very cool crossover and story. I really like your Xander/Vi paring. Poor Uncle Rory. I hope it was a really great cigarette. It looks like Xander wasn't the only one in the Harris family that attracted demon chicks. Lol!
Comments from author:
I was trying to come up with some totally implausible burnt-out alcoholic story that Rory would invent, when I realized that it would be even better if it was true. Some demoness-friend of Anya like Vaughnie from nwhepcat's Xander/Faith stories would totally fit the bill.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Cool crossover dude =).
By the way, the Slayer in spanish is called "La Cazadora".

See ya!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the heads up. That transliteration gave me "hunter" and didn't feel right. I've seen translation for matador as "killer" somewhere and I winged it. I have changed it to Cazavampiros, because that's what YouTube (LOL) showed for BtVS in Spanish.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
Nice one.

Missing a word here:

> “And yet you the slayer thing, why?”

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
Thanks--fixed. I corrected it on a draft but must not have saved it...the dread machine mocks me.
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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