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Review of chapter "Manifesto" from AllenPitt
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So Whistler is behind this. I wonder why he wants to help Connor on this. (Makes me wonder if this is a world where Booth (DB) is at the Jeffersonian...).
So Darla is kinda like Connor now? Human/heartbeat, but with extra abilities? How awkward this is all going to be for Dexter. To think he picked her so he'd look more 'normal'.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from hanahanachan
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You can't juzt dangle connor and then end the chapter!!! I hope you update soon! !
Comments from author:
Lol, I'm sorry. I'm slowly trying to get back to my fanfics after a slow and painful writers block and life in general getting me down. Coming out of a bit of a funk now and happy that I'm getting me inspiration back. :(
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from JediKnight
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Very interesting job, but you have some grammar problems here.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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Oh my god. Well, now you've posted pictures and you've gotten me reading, you CANNOT leave me hanging like that!

I can't wait for what comes next.

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from toowhiteprincess
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I keep wondering what her other kids will think about their brother who they have never met.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from Christy
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I actually really like it so far- and I'm not a big Dexter fan, either...can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
Thanks Christy. :)
Review By [Christy] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from dreameralways
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This should definitely be continued. I'm not really sure where you could take it, but it would be interesting.
Comments from author:
I'm not really sure either. :( Thanks for the review.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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Man, I didn't see that coming! You gotta finish this woman, or I will find you and mount you on the front of the Enterprise as a hood ornament!!

Blue

How am I doing for creative threats?

heheh
Comments from author:
LOL, as soon as possible. Please don't hurt me Blue. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from TouchoftheWind
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Is it Connor? EEEE! I really want to see a hug between Connor and Rita- with her whispering something about him being her 'Miracle'. Great update!
Comments from author:
Thanks TW, glad you like it. Her little Miracle, hmmm interesting. Thanks for the review.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise Guest" from AllenPitt
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Connor, finding yet another screwed up family. That kid never learns. I wonder how he found out that "Rita" was Darla. Maybe he consulted an oracle? Maybe Darla had made a deal with W&H similar to the one Angel later made to save Connor? i.e. 'died and then reborn' ? She figured she'd start life over as a human?
So sad she wound up in an abusive relationship, that's the one thing Darla would never have stood for. And now some of her vampiric abilities have returned? It'd be ironic if this is the 'shanshu' and she was the 'vampire with a soul' of the prophecy.
Can't you just picture Drusilla showing up next to see her 'brother' (Connor) ? She'd probably like Dexter a lot. And can you imagine Dexter as a vampire? Hm, he might stick to 'the rules', come to think of it...
Comments from author:
Well heck Allen, that's a lot to think about there lol. might have to lean to one of your thoughts there. :) If I do credit will be given. Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pregnancy Dilemma" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very interesting- she should feel the love she felt for Connor as Darla- and she should run into him at some point! Connor should also be a champion!

Angel should also be in it! Could have some jealously from Dexter's side!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [16 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pregnancy Dilemma" from AngelBlack
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ooh-hoo! Maybe she could track Angel down or he could be helping in a case of Dexter's?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. And Angel just might make an appearance of maybe Booth hmmmm.
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [12 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pregnancy Dilemma" from Arekanderu
Review:
Very interesting :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. :-))
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [12 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rita Sordid Past Life" from toowhiteprincess
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I think Dexter would at least try to offer advice on having her see someone about the nightmares. She does not have to tell him about the nightmares, yet.

She already has two children and the nightmares might be about her fears about messing up her children's lives. Who knows what a doctor would say to her. I suggest looking up what dreams mean and what a doctor would say about such dreams.

Maybe, she could look them up herself because of her fear of what others might think of her.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if Dexter's advice would be uhmm.. would sooth her fears in the least but might make her run screaming and pulling her hair out, LOL. Seeking psych help might be the right road though and maybe getting down to the meaning of the dreams. Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [11 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pregnancy Dilemma" from Sandi
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Darla's demon may be trying for another shot at the body. It may be an echo of the body in which case does she have to die to give birth? So many possible directions to go with this. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, some interesting ideas, I'm glad I got you wondering.:) Thanks for the review.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [11 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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